good capture of the BDSM,
That was hot... until it got morbidly creepifying and made me turn out my dinner.
And yet I still loved it! Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thanks. I found it hilarious myself. ;-)
Interesting pairing. *sigh* That bit at the end nearly made me retch. Don't get me wrong, this was incredibly written, but Umbridge... dear lord. She reminds me of my English teacher, but a foofier version.
Author's Response: Heh! It was supposed to be a surprise, but I'm sorry to make you retch! I figured it was the only way that Percy was going to get any sex while he was acting like such a prat! And poor you to have a teacher like that.
Ugh, Umbridge. But I did enjoy the story. I always knew that Percy was a kinky little bugger.
Bambu 2007.07.10 - 10:04PM
I wasn't really surprised by their identities, but what I liked most was his reaction to her at the end; to who she was. I loved that.
I could easily see him getting off on the control and power a sub/dom relationship entails.
sabinatarium 2007.07.19 - 12:49AM
w0w. that was SO erotic- and then the end just totally killed it. I put myself in the woman's shoes and enjoyed it a whole lot, and the fact that it was Percy did nothing whatsoever to lessen it... but UMBRIDGE? ewwwwwwwwww!!!.... ...but great work!
Lyrena 2007.07.19 - 05:36PM
Haha I loved the way you did the reveal at the end
HumanTales 2007.07.20 - 10:46PM
Unconventional pairing is right! And there is something about the pairing that makes this deliciously wrong.
ms_fit 2007.07.26 - 12:58AM
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hahaha... i always thought Percy would be into BDSM! too bad Umbrage didn't bring her special quill...
nightshift 2007.08.09 - 05:19AM
It was so hot. But now that I've read the end, I have to go burn my eyes out. GAH. I'm surprised there wasn't a ball gag to keep her from "hem, hem"-ing.
nightshift 2007.08.09 - 05:19AM It was so hot. But now that I've read the end, I have to go burn my eyes out. GAH. I'm surprised there wasn't a ball gag to keep her from "hem, hem"-ing.
That was hot... until it got morbidly creepifying and made me turn out my dinner. And yet I still loved it! Awesome job! Author's Response: Thanks. I found it hilarious myself. ;-)
Interesting pairing. *sigh* That bit at the end nearly made me retch. Don't get me wrong, this was incredibly written, but Umbridge... dear lord. She reminds me of my English teacher, but a foofier version. Author's Response: Heh! It was supposed to be a surprise, but I'm sorry to make you retch! I figured it was the only way that Percy was going to get any sex while he was acting like such a prat! And poor you to have a teacher like that.
Ugh, Umbridge. But I did enjoy the story. I always knew that Percy was a kinky little bugger.
Bambu 2007.07.10 - 10:04PM I wasn't really surprised by their identities, but what I liked most was his reaction to her at the end; to who she was. I loved that. I could easily see him getting off on the control and power a sub/dom relationship entails.
sabinatarium 2007.07.19 - 12:49AM w0w. that was SO erotic- and then the end just totally killed it. I put myself in the woman's shoes and enjoyed it a whole lot, and the fact that it was Percy did nothing whatsoever to lessen it... but UMBRIDGE? ewwwwwwwwww!!!.... ...but great work!
Celisnebula 2007.08.30 - 03:42PM 1: Career Advancement Signed [Delete] Lyrena 2007.07.19 - 05:36PM Haha I loved the way you did the reveal at the end
HumanTales 2007.07.20 - 10:46PM Unconventional pairing is right! And there is something about the pairing that makes this deliciously wrong.
ms_fit 2007.07.26 - 12:58AM ,br> hahaha... i always thought Percy would be into BDSM! too bad Umbrage didn't bring her special quill...