Another great chapter! They're so good toghether, and you made the meeting with Fred very smooth.
another great chapter the more you write the more I see the two of them together I look forward to more chapters and to seeing how the rest of the family takes this development
Too cute! Next one soon?
I liked it!...a lot! More please.
Out of all the Luna's I've read, I love your. She is absolutely just as I , pictured her and just like I imagined her conversations to sound like. Lovely!
Aww! That last part was wonderful. :-) I hope you update this! I'm a Ron/Luna shipper, but George/Luna is a cute prospect!
I so look forward to thenext chapter I love the idea of Luna and George
I especially liked a kiss and I really liked George's response. :)
It's a beautifull story! I always thought that George was kinder too.
I have never pictured Luna with any other Weasley except for "Ronald", but you make the idea of George and Luna a charming potential- now I must look for more fanfiction on this highly unuslly pairing. I hope you update again soon.
Very nice chapter! The interaction between George and Luna is really sweet. And the development of their relationship feels probable, not too hasty.
*squeals with delight* Oh this is so ruddy brilliant! I absolutely ADORE your Luna... and George... and Fred and Verity and Lee. Blimey! (and now I'm talking like a Weasley) It's so wonderful. I love Luna and her openness. And George... he's so in denial! Sweet! Excellent job! I certainly cannot wait to see where you take this next! (are there enough !! in this review?)
I love how you defined Fred and George's individual personalities...something many authors can't, or just don't, do. Luna was also quite spot on. Great job. I'll be looking for more.
The characters were captured very well--I found it very ...charming. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Always good to know that characters I love stayed true in my stories.
Not only can you write Remus and Nymphadora, you do a brilliant job with George and Luna. I am so incredibly impressed with your characterizations they are wonderfully accurate. I still wish you would add a bit of description to your dialogue. You are brilliant in both and combining the two would make everything flow so much better. I certainly cannot wait for the next chapter to see where you will be taking this. Such a wonderful story idea!
Author's Response: Glad you liked this too. I am keeping your suggestions in mind as I write Thanks for the review.
I love it. Will be on the look out for more soon I hope.
Author's Response: Thnak you for the review! More to come soon.
This is absolutely charming! Beautiful job introducing the characters -- I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is about half done.
I think this is a great short story
I think Luna is so under valued
I think she is a great person
Thanks for the great story
Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you like where it goes next.
I liked this immensely. It was sweet.
Author's Response: I'm glad you did. Thanks for reviewing.
BRILLIANT. Unusual ship, but brilliant. And you're right, George IS kinder.
Author's Response: Thank you! I read a brilliant essay on 'George is kinder', and it got me thinking. Luna needs someone kind and a little crazy, too. Made perfect sense to me.
That was a very sweet story
I love George Luna as a pairing (actually ai just love George)
Very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love George too. Apparently I am not alone, because so far, this story has gotten more of a response than any of my others.
Very nice start! Iīve always liked George best of all the Weasleys, so itīs good to read a story concentrating on him. I think you captired him very well.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love George, too, so I was a little nervous to attempt him on his own.
Hi there!
Your story is wonderful! Really funny and well thought. Actually I noticed that in the books we have more information on Fred than on George, so it's nice to see them as different persons...
And the pairing George /Luna has lots of potential, wouldn't you say?
Good job.
xx Dipper
Author's Response: Thank you! I think there is a lot of potential there, too. So much that I am suprised there are only a couple of Luna/Twin stories out there.