wow that was amazing, so sad. well now i guess we know why shes so strong. very well written.
Well-written and chilling.
I really enjoyed that. Did Severus hurt her too? I think it was a great bit of writing.
So painful, yet you've written this beautifully! The idea that Snape would have allowed this to happen, yet she knew that he was not fully behind it is interesting. I adore the line about the moon turning green. I didn't understand that till then end, when I thought of the Dark Mark, and it flipped the switch in my brain. Very good. I do hope you'll continue.