Great start!
Author's Response: Thanks! 2 more parts coming soon.
A fabulous read ... I really like the descriptions of the characters as well as their setting ... you've a good eye for detail, which is something often overlooked in favour of lemons ... I appreciate the effort and the outcome
*gasp* I even like the OC *checks to make sure no one heard her say that out loud*
Now stop reading the reviews and get to writing! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Your last sentence gave me a laugh because this is an old story of mine. I wrote it in December of 2003, and it's actually the first Bill/Hermione I ever tried to write. Plus, at the time, it was the longest complete story I had ever written. It still is the longest *complete* story, but I have other works in progress which are lengths longer now. Anyway, thanks much for the kind words. I'll be bringing the other 2 chapters over shortly. If you're the slightest bit curious, though, you can read the full story under my account at Astronomy Tower (Fiction Alley) or FanFiction.Net. I have the same user name in both places.