*Tears* That was well writen, and very probable.
OOOOh really...I was close to tears..it is so balancly emotional..Man! You know how to write emotional stories!
Omg, I cried when I read this. You really know how to incorporate emotion into a story. You better keep on writing, you're awesome. Way to go on writting such a good, sad ficlet.
Wow it was so bitter sweet. I could read it a million times
Simple, poignant, heartbreaking. You should be proud.