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Reviewer: Threesisters Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2005 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 4

Just wanted to say well done, a really good story, written well and I am a sucker for happy ever after endings. Thank you. Will be watching out for your pen name again. Rated 8 because I wish there was a sequel telling us what happened to them in the future.

Reviewer: tisasil Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/10/2005 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

I just joined The Burrows and yours is the first story I'm reading. After reading the first chapter, I'm glad I joined. I like your writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: Julie Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2005 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

Yes, but babies woujld be nice!

Author's Response: Babies ARE nice -- I'm rather fond of my two-- but Hermione is planning on a career with Bill as a curse-breaker. I think the kidlets can wait a bit.

Reviewer: QueneArual Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2004 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 4

“Bill, love, your mother used the charm for years.” HAHAHA! That was great. Great story, very cute. I enjoyed it. I look forward to more from you. 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for the great review!

Reviewer: QueneArual Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2004 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 3

Awww, poor Bill. :( Nice story. 10

Author's Response: Things get better for him!

Reviewer: runaway mental patient Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/26/2004 12:26 am Title: Chapter 4

jolly good story chap! I hope you do some kind of sequal. are u planning one

Author's Response: You know, I wasn't, but now I'm kind of thinking about it. Thank you for reviewing!!

Reviewer: southern_witch_69 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2004 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is my first Bill and Hermione story. It was great. Sweet story!

Author's Response: Glad youliked it!

Reviewer: Evan M Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2004 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 4

Very hot. This story has the right bit of romance and humor and everything, and I'm really enjoying it. Looking forward to the next update! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so so much! I'm afraid it's complete in the four chapters. At least for now...

Reviewer: Evan M Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2004 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hey, I'm laughing already. Fred and George's marriage proposal thing was hilarious, especially Hermione's solution for it. Now, onward to the next three chapters! :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: bleu Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/22/2004 11:21 am Title: Chapter 4

Bloody hell! Talk about a hot scene there... Really loved the story, especially the development of the closeness between them... You're a really good writer, and I like the way the story unfolded...

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much for the compliment! I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: spaz141@shaw.ca Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2004 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

Its official, I *heart* you! Great story, my preference has always been, Hermione/someone older (or Harry - forgive me?). I have only read two other stories with the Hermione/Bill pairing, this makes three and I loved it, humour, romance, a touch of angst and then the uber pay-off at the end. Brilliant, thanks for writing. Dare I read the other one? I'll have to wait until I get my pass word at any rate. Thanks again!

Author's Response: Oh, go ahead and read! I promise, it isn't too yucky! And I *heart* you right back! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: DMitchell1985 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

That was an interesting end! =D Not that I did not see it coming, mind you. I did like the little spat. I can see a real woman doing exactly that, getting mad, and then going out dressed in skin. *lol* You should label it humor all the way through because I had some laughs. Oh! In a couple of places, you were spacing didn't go through. I loved that last line about Mrs. Weasley and the charm. Will have to borrow! Of course I will credit you. Now, I am off to read your other story. Danielle

Author's Response: I'm glad you ended up enjoying the story -- I know it wasn't exactly a "surprise" ending. :D

Reviewer: nectarofvenus Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 4

Love, lust, jealousy, revenge, humour and one great sex scene in four chapters. I do believe that I have fallen in love with you. I will definitely read all of your work. Any Christmas specials in mind?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment!! No Christmas specials in mind at the moment, but I so have a SS/HG christmas poem/parody at Ashwinder if you're interested.

Reviewer: GinnyWeasel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 11:26 am Title: Chapter 4

YAY!!! I love it!

Author's Response: I'm so very happy you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: GinnyWeasel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 11:19 am Title: Chapter 3

No one else could make vomiting so sweet! Great job!

Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad it didn't squick you!

Reviewer: kaylee Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 10:04 am Title: Chapter 4

Hahahahaha oh dear, while i love molly that is hilarious. thank you so much for the wonderful, hilarious story. smiles!

Author's Response: Oh, I love Molly too. I just can imagine her as a bit of a ... active mother-in-law. Not mean or nasty, just interfering because she's already got the habit of making everything run smoothly.

Reviewer: Killer Queen Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 07:41 am Title: Chapter 4

Very sweet and romanitc. This better not be finished yet!

Author's Response: You know, it's complete in the four chapters, but I've had a few people wanting it continued. I may have to think about it and see if the bunny bites. And thank you for the compliment.

Reviewer: Kav Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 07:22 am Title: Chapter 4

aww very sweet, loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!!

Reviewer: runaway mental patient Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 04:14 am Title: Chapter 4

good fic!

Author's Response: Thanks! Love your user name. :D

Reviewer: blah_blah_blah Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2004 02:59 am Title: Chapter 4

Another job well done!

“Why the Muggle pill and not the charm?” “Bill, love, your mother used the charm for years.” I love it!!

Author's Response: You know, that's the line that started the fic off. I had that and the British Museum in my head and wrote the story around them.

Reviewer: ShagsTheDustmop Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is sweet, I like the camaraderie between Bill and Hermione. This is a ship I don't see often enough so I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Wow! I'm so thrilled you liked it. I'm a fan of your work in a big way, so am very flattered!

Reviewer: DMitchell1985 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 3

How sweet, and digusting. *lol* The interaction between them looks wonderfully promising (Not that I have any doubts as to what is going to happen). I am glad that another chapter was able to come through today. Danielle

Author's Response: I can see you are a woman who knows where this is going! ~wicked grin~ I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: nectarofvenus Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

It's so very fluffy and sweet, that I think my teeth will rot out. In a completely pleasant way. I like the romantic, tear-jerkers deep down in a secret place no one knows about. I do think that there isn't much to approve upon. Your developement, while fast, is enjoyable. The teasing repartee seems to fit perfectly with how you portray the characters. As long as you don't lock them in a room to shag likr bunnies in the next chapter, the rest of the story should come along well. (Not that I'm opposed to the shagging like bunnies part, it's just entirely too early. Make them suffer just a little longer.)

Author's Response: I'm afraid that it's been finished for eight months, so what happens, happens. There is just a tiny ickle bit of angst first though. Glad you're liking it!

Reviewer: Clara Minutes Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 3

I really like this story so far. I also commend you for being the first to post a story on The Burrow! Happy writing.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm very excited to share it with people who enjoy the Weasleys as much as I do.

Reviewer: Padfoot_mckechnie Anonymous star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 3

This is bound to be a very cute story from what i have read so far. I have read the three chapters posted so far and I think its excellent. Do continue this story soon.

Author's Response: It's all in the queue ready to go. I'm so glad you're liking the fluff!

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