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Reviewer: kaylee Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

this is so sweet, and it's the first story, congradulations on that. thank you so much, i can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Mel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 2

Well done, love. It's excellent! It's progressing in a rather realistic manner, and I love the food...of course, I haven't eaten dinner yet as I'm writing this, so anything sounds good to me. Pass me a menu, I'd like to see what you're cooking up next! -Mel

Author's Response: I couldn't ever see why Hermione could make Polyjuice in her 2nd year but wouldn't be able to throw together a frittata. Glad you're liking it!!

Reviewer: Winna Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 2

Very interesting so far. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes. And congrats on having the very first story on what looks to be an interesting new site!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm pretty excited about the Weasley love!

Reviewer: GinnyWeasel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

If a small, traitorous portion of his mind whispered that he was just a bit interested in what lacy things Hermione might possess, he would never admit it to himself. LOL! YAY!!! I love it! Update soon!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! More should be up very soon.

Reviewer: GinnyWeasel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it! I really like it! I like Bill too, but that's besdide the point. Must go and read the second chapter!

Author's Response: He's hot, he's smart, he's cool...what's not to love about Bill? :D

Reviewer: QueneArual Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awww, so cute. Write more! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully, more up soon!

Reviewer: DMitchell1985 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

I loved the progression in this chapter. It sets up a future relationship in a reasonable manner. I have actually never read this pairing before, so it is refreshing. I have always wondered about the older Weasleys. I agree about Charming everything done. I look forward to future chapters. Danielle

Author's Response: Thank you again. You are too sweet! I can just see Hermione enjoying getting her hands dirty so to speak.

Reviewer: DMitchell1985 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

You should include Humor as a Genre. I had plenty of good laughs in this chapter. I especially loved the line about Voldemort and the mud (Note: I might have to 'borrow' it and thank you heavily in the AU. =] )and the part where Hermione kissed Fred. Wonderfully funny. Danielle P.S. Congrats on being the first story posted. I was eager to see who would go first.

Author's Response: Thanks! Maybe I will go back and put this into humor...and borrow away!

Reviewer: dopeydora Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 11:23 am Title: Chapter 2

I am very much enjoying your story and looking forward to reading more...soon I hope ;-) Cathy N

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it's all submitted, so as soon as it's validated, it's all yours. :D

Reviewer: wood_n_snape Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 11:06 am Title: Chapter 2

I really like this story. I think I've read it before, but I am loving reading it again. I can't quite remember what exactly happens next so I wait with anticipation for an update. Plus congratulations on being the first author in this community! I think that makes you an honourary Weasley!!! Great job! ~Annie WNS :D

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks! I DO have red hair and am a plump little momma, so I guess I'm Molly. :D

Reviewer: Mrs Bill Weasley Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 08:44 am Title: Chapter 2

I love it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! More to come soon!

Reviewer: Gia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 08:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Normally I love the HG/SS ship, but your story so far convinces me that BW/HG is a pairing to get into. Great job with the characterization thus far. Nothing was overdone. Look forward to updates.

Author's Response: Thanks! I write mostly HG/SS actually but Bill does have his appeal!

Reviewer: Whimsy Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2004 07:18 am Title: Chapter 2

nice story - I always like a bit of Bill/Hermione or Charlie/Hermione. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Oh yes, me too. I love those older Weasley boys something fierce. There's more coming, including lemony Bill-goodness -- long hair, fang earring..mmmmm!

Reviewer: oceangirl Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2004 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 2

I think I may have seen this story somewhere else, and I still think it's great! I can't wait to read the end!

Author's Response: It was on ff.net for a bit and AFF as well. But, since we now have a Weasley section at my favorite archive, I had to put it up. Oh, and thank you so much for the lovely compliment! It's all in the queue so hopefully you won't have to wait long.

Reviewer: jes Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2004 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 2

this is a great atory so far!! I love it!! What a great way to get them together!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I have a weakness for Bill and I keep thinking that he and Hermione would actually be pretty good together.

Reviewer: Trey Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/16/2004 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lol voldermort mud comment was hilarious. I like this. update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Actually, the whole thing is finished and in the queue to be validated, so it should all be up before long.

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