[Report This]Date: 08/17/2008 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
Time to update fer Merlin's sake!
[Report This]Date: 05/17/2006 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hot Damn! I love this story. Even incomplete it's going into my fav's list and I damn the site for not having alerts to tell me when its updated. It's the best, most interesting Luna I've seen to date in fanfic. I loved your explanation for her social awkwardness, her repelling charm in the dance, her voice as a reporter, how she talks to dragons--and what an interesting match all the makes her for Charlie. My only crit, a minor one, is that you have in the article that different dragon "species" aren't allowed to breed and present it as a bad thing in terms of biological diversity. The very definition of a species is that they can't have fertile offspring. That's a very minor carp about a story I loved. Hope there's more soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2006 10:09 pm Title: Dangerous Liaisons
Ok... this is my first review but I liked your story so much I figured I should tell you. The plot is intresting and I like how you set up the begining of each chapter with a bit from Luna's journal. Be careful when you are repeating events from diffrent points of view, I think things got mixed up at the end of the two chapters with the order of Luna talking to Norbert and when she actually reached out to "shake his hand". Other than that I really do love your story and look forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 04/10/2006 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
Dude. This is awesome. Ther eis not enough Luna in the Potterverse, and good Luna at that. Yay!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2006 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is fantastic. Charlie is my all time favorite. This is the first Charlie/Luna fic I've read. I laughed so hard during the first chapter my husband thought I lost my mind. Please update soon, I really can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 03/24/2006 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
I surely hope that you all are going to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2006 04:30 am Title: Dangerous Liaisons
This is just plain wonderful. The interview with Norbert had me in *tears*!
Author's Response: Thank you for letting us know you're enjoying it! More Norbert, coming up!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2006 08:27 am Title: Dangerous Liaisons
Cool, Luna can speak with Dragons! I want to see more interaction between her and Charlie.
Author's Response: Yes, she can! It comes as a bit of a surprise to her too as she's never really had much contact with dragons before! There is definitely more interaction coming up....
;) Poultrygeist
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2006 08:18 am Title: Dirty Dancing
It's an interesting start, I'm looking forward to read more about this.
Author's Response: The third chapter is written and submitted... We're so glad to hear that you're enjoying this! We've had a lot of fun writing together, and it's nice to finally have some ready to share.
[Report This]Date: 02/02/2006 10:36 am Title: Dirty Dancing
Very interesting chapter. Can't wait to see where this is going.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! The next chapter is in the queue... :) Poultrygeist