[Report This]Date: 08/16/2005 08:38 pm Title: Prologue - It Can't Hurt to Change Things, Not Anymore
Why isn't there more, please write more!!
Author's Response: If you are still using this archive, and interested in my story, the Color of Power, I must ask you to go to Fanfiction.net where I have continued my story. I can't deal with the stress of having about seven acounts to different websites, so I have this at fanfiction. You may want to reread there, to remind yourself and to notice the changes that I have made, but please do take a look.
[Report This]Date: 07/01/2005 03:20 pm Title: Prologue - It Can't Hurt to Change Things, Not Anymore
hey i think you have a good story but when are you going to update I wan't to know how it continues
Author's Response: If you are still using this archive, and interested in my story, the Color of Power, I must ask you to go to Fanfiction.net where I have continued my story. I can't deal with the stress of having about seven acounts to different websites, so I have this at fanfiction. You may want to reread there, to remind yourself and to notice the changes that I have made, but please do take a look.
[Report This]Date: 05/22/2005 06:54 pm Title: Prologue - It Can't Hurt to Change Things, Not Anymore
Very promising start! Please don't make this a "redeemed by the love of a good woman" story. I get the impression that Ginny is going back in time to just the right moment, when Tom is on the razor's edge. Before he decided to become totally selfish and power-mad.
Kind of like persuading a young Adolf to turn all his God-given talents to art. Ginny's got her work cut out for her.
Tom would be 12 and Ginny 18?
Author's Response: I have not updated in a long time, but tom 12? I can't see tom at twelve, but don't worry. Ginny's not going to redeem him. I will do from Tom's point of view when I show each little piece of what changes his mind. He's not on razor's edge... he's only pondering world domination at this point. I don't like the "redeemed by the love of a good woman" plot-line either. If you read me bending that way, just scream at me. I sometimes wander from my main plot. Thanks so much for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04/21/2005 09:10 am Title: Prologue - It Can't Hurt to Change Things, Not Anymore
WOW!!! I'm not sure when this was orginally posted, since I'm reading this from the titles list but are you going to write more? I think your concept is soo orginal, and that is a hard thing to find with these characters. Your concpetion of Ginny as the fighter willing to give ALL to keep the dream alive is so dead on for how I picture her. Thank you for a wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you and yes to you and everyone else who is so upset that I haven't updated. My sister was caught reading some iffy material on fanfiction.net and my dad blocked it, and simultaniously, my computer has crashed, and all my files are gone so I have to go to school, copy my newer chapters from ff.net and put them here. If you're impatient with me, try to fight it, or at least go to fanfiction.net to read the next two chapters. The fourth chapter is in progress. Thanks for your review
[Report This]Date: 02/28/2005 11:07 pm Title: Prologue - It Can't Hurt to Change Things, Not Anymore
Sounds like an interesting start.
Author's Response: I'd like to think so
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2005 07:21 pm Title: Prologue - It Can't Hurt to Change Things, Not Anymore
Great! a nice prologue. i loved the first paragraph. i can't wait until the next chapter. i like the plot, how you have shown us in the prologue in an obrupt way, though it might've been better if you had taken the last sentence in the first paragraph and hadn't explained what Ginny was doing until the very last paragraph/line in the prologue. It would have been more exciting, and it would make the readers read through to find the answers. goodjob, i give you a ten, because you actually took the time to write this and to post it here.
Author's Response: That's a good idea, but I'm too lazy to go back and change it. Thanks for helping though
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2005 02:34 pm Title: Prologue - It Can't Hurt to Change Things, Not Anymore
Very intriguing beginning!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like the beginning.
[Report This]Date: 02/22/2005 12:00 pm Title: Prologue - It Can't Hurt to Change Things, Not Anymore
Wow, that was intense. I can't wait to see where this is going. I hate to see them resorting to Dark Magic, but I know they would only do that if they were truly desperate, so that adds to the intensity. The part where Snape punched Ginny was awful, but very moving. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Strider
Author's Response: Thanks. I wanted to use the Snape and Ginny attack to show how despirate they really were, so despirate to hurt each other and to use dark magic.