I really adore the way you wrote Ginny. Harry was well-written, too, but Ginny seemed like you'd plucked her right out of the book and dropped her into your story. Quite a feat, that is. I haven't found many good renderings of Ginny... But anyway! That was definitely the sexiest trip to Gringotts ever written.
It was a nice change to see Harry comfortable as a bit more dominative than most fics (not that I read a lot of Harry-centric HP fanfiction which is quite funny if you think about it). Thanks for another great read, I'm happy I stumbled upon it since I didn't think to search for you as an author on this site. Oh, and you definitely deserve points for original location.
Author's Response: Thanks, Bluebell! I don't normally do Harry fics either (my main thing is SS/HG, after all), and Weasley fics aren't my cuppa--I just have the twincest one, which someone won as a little contest prize--but I did have fun writing this one. I certainly had fun coming up with the unique location, heehee! I'm happy you enjoyed it. ~Lotm
katiek 2007.08.22 - 07:13PM
Delightful and well-written. Keep it up!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, katiek! ~Lotm
sempra 2007.08.04 - 08:11AM
very inventive and well written, and who know Ginny was a bit of an exhibitionist.
Author's Response: Heehee, she didn't know it either! ~Lotm
pumkin 2007.07.28 - 02:13AM
loved it
Author's Response: Thanks, ~Lotm
HumanTales 2007.07.20 - 10:45PM
Full marks to Harry for inventiveness and naughtiness. And full marks to Ginny for keeping her lover in line! Delightfully, amusingly naughty.
Author's Response: Thanks, Celisnebula! ~Lotm
Author's Response: Grrr, argh...sorry, I meant, thanks, HumanTales! *facepalms* It's because they switched this from Anonymous to the actual author, so Celis had to enter everyone's comments by hand... Ah, well. I'm glad you enjoyed it! ~Lotm
Night Owl 2007.07.19 - 04:56AM
:D Brilliant, whoever you are! This fic is exactly why I like challenges - you always hope for something refreshingly original, hopelessly amusing and just plain excellent. Great job, especially with writing an unfamiliar pair.
Author's Response: *curtsy* Thanks! I've only dabbled a tiny bit in the HP/GW arena, but this one was fun to write. ~Lotm
beaweasley2 2007.06.18 - 10:16AM
Considering the rules - you did a really good job. Nice story - enjoyable ride!
Author's Response: Lol--a lovely double-entendre! ~Lotm
barbara 2007.06.10 - 05:55AM
LOL
Dear mystery author, you truly have a wicked imagination. And I am very thankful for that!
Besides the obvious hotness, I liked the style and writing very much.
Author's Response: Well, of course I'm a mystery author. I wear a masque, after all! *snerk* This was a slightly different style than my normal writing, but I think I pulled it off nicely; I'm glad you enjoyed it! ~Lotm
ahsun92 2007.05.25 - 03:40PM
This.Is.Just.Brilliant.
Author's Response: Thanks, Ahsun! ~Lotm