great
Killer cliff-hanger! Please update soon! Am dying of suspense! Hope you complete it soon!!
I'm loving the cliff hanger, I can't wait till the next chapter. And being fairly new to this site (i'm on ashwider a lot though) I'm excited about Hermione and Bill. Keep up the good work!
I laughed out loud at those last two lines. Seconds earlier and my screen would've been covered in water... And I'd like to loan you a '.' for the last line. Seems someone lost one. :D Keep up the great work!
ahh! Need more asap! lol love it!!! Keep it commin!
assuming you wont continue this...
Heartily looking forward to the next gripping installment of this work. Will they live happily ever after? Will Draco pull any pranks on the happy couple? Will Ron look good in a bridesmaids dress? Update soon please I lead such a dull life I need this story!! LOL ;o)X
A wonderful story, ummmm, any chance of an update anytime soon?
Great story. I bet Mr. Granger will have a fit! I love how you have written this story about Bill and Hermione. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Love you name. April is the best month of the year, no? New chapter up soon, i promise.
Killer cliff-hanger... please update soon or my head will explode... u write so well... i love Bill/Hermione centric fics... i love that pair.... please do continue soon...
Author's Response: Thanks darling, I'm sorry i haven't updated in ages. I feel like whacking my head. I have to sort myself out some more and then I'll be fit for posting.
Any luck on the beta thing yet??
i am still here anxiously awaiting your update on the story i really love it and want to know what happens next
mariann
Author's Response: I need a beta!!! HELP!!! Mail me at inevanriet75@hotmail.com if u know anyone.
Cheers
please post soon i am on pinns and needles i really want to read more it is an amazing story
Mariann
Author's Response: I'm sorry, darling, i'm looking for a new beta and haven't had any luck thus far. If you know anyone, please mail me (inevanriet75@hotmail.com). I'll be in Barcelona for 2 weeks starting friday so if you don't get a quick responce, that's why.
Thanks for the wonderful review!!
LOL! Good thus far!
Author's Response: hehe, thanks for reviewing!!!
I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment. I'm such a sucker for Hermione/Weasley pairings if Ron and Percy aren't choices :)
Author's Response: I know i keep writing this, but i'm REALLY sorry i can't post my next chapter. My beta hasn't responded to my mail since March. I'm concerned something might have happened. I've been asking around for a new beta i haven't recieved any responces. If you know anyone, please mail me.(inevanriet75@hotmail.com)
Thanks again for reviewing!!
OOOOHHH! That's really evil!
Update soon because I just adore this story.
Excellent job
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm doing my best to get the next chapter to you as soon as possible.
Thanks again for your review!
Hehehe, silence indeed!
Update soon please!
Author's Response: It wont be quiet for long....
Thank you for reviewing.
Sorry, but this is so immature that I wonder how anyone could have read more that one "chapter".
Also, I thought that writers under 18 were not allowed in this archive?
Author's Response: Well there's no need to be rude when you don't like a story. If HG/BW isn't your thing then you shouldn't be reading from this archive. I know my writing style isn't brilliant but I’m using Fan Fiction to improve. This was a silly little idea I had to start off with and so far I think it's developing well. To find that out you'll have to read the rest of the chapters. I've been told by readers that chapter 2 is lovely and spicy. In the future, please don't presume anyone is under 18 when you think they write immaturely and definitely don't write it in a review. I think I speak for the other writers of this site as well when I say that we welcome 'constructive criticism' but no flaming.
oh i love it!
Author's Response: Glad u did. Next chapter will be up as soon as my wonderful beta returns it.
please update!!! *Begs*
Author's Response: I've just sent it to my beta. A little more time, it'll be up soon. Sorry!!!
come on up date!~~ I really want to know whats going to happen please ~_~
Author's Response: It's getting there...Sorry this is taking ages!
Hi! You know that you can't leave us like this, right? :)
Author's Response: I know, i'm sorry!! I've been in and out of hospitals for over a month and schoolwork keeps piling up. I'm terribly sorry, but i'll get to posting the next chapter after i get the results of my blood tests.
heeey meisje!!
alles is heel goed!!
ik heb ontzettend gelachen heb nog niets alles uit maar ik wel zeker de rest lezen!!! ben trots op je en vind het heel knap van je!! heel mooi boek!!
kussies
Author's Response: Thank you Laura. Je bent een schat!!! dikke kussies en tot in school!! xxx
Absolutely fantastic!!! Congrats with the story!!! Can't wait till the next chapter!!! If you ever need help, you know where to find me!!! I'm really honoured to help you!!! Love, your friend Sophie ;)
Author's Response: Sophie, you're ths BOMB!! have a nice weekend girl!!
I am really enjoying this story. Being an avid HG/SS shipper, I find it hard to read anything that has Hermione with anyone else. But you are doing a good job. It seems a bit fast-paced, and in real-time Hermione would not be having morning sickness yet, but I realized that it had to be done this way because of the plot's time line. Excellent story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you've decided to read this BW/HG story. Personally i prefer SS/HG too, but the idea just popped into my head and i couldn't resist writing it. The story was supposed to be fast-paced, but since i'm getting so many wonderful review, im starting to slow the story down a little. Can't make too many promises though.