Sequel pretty please with chocolate chip cookies!!!!
That was simply beautiful and so sad! Please tell me you'll continue the story!!! It's just too good to be over, even though the ending reminded me of Scarlet O'Hara so bad after she lost Rhett at the end of Gone with the Wind. Please continue, I was almost crying at the end and I really wanna know how Bill plans to get her back and how it'll all work out in the end. Plus, you are good, really good and there are just not too many good Bill/Hermione stories out there!
I really like the story, but can you answer me why do the older members of the plots always act as if they have such a problem with the age of the woman who wants them, when in reality we all know they wouldn't care one little bit?
The end??? AAAAAHHH There had better be a sequel!!! I'll cry if there isnt, i want to know what happens! Well once again Inell, a brilliant smutty story ^_^
wow!r u gona write a sequel or sumthin coz i rily rily wana know wats gona happen next...great story!
The End?!? Ack! I want to see him get her back darn it! *calms down* Yeah, I really enjoyed that, I wouldn't mind reading more of it!
Good story.
Is there a sequel where he gets her back? If not, would you be willing to write it?
This story needs to be continued. Pretty, please?
amazingly hot as usual. i love bill/hermione pairings. i love the ending of your fic. it kinda has a hopeful determined ending doesnt it? if you ever do write a next part, i would love to read it. evie
amazingly hot as usual. i love bill/hermione pairings. i love the ending of your fic. it kinda has a hopeful determined ending doesnt it? if you ever do write a next part, i would love to read it. evie
The End?! The end? No. That is not an end. That is supposed to say: to be continued... URG! very nice other than that part.
*Gulp* This story was soooo...provocative that my throat is dry. I hope there will be more.
This is freaking fantastic! Such a different take on relationships then normally is portrayed. You are such a great author. Thanks for sharing your work!
That was great! A follow-up chapter would've been nice, but it stands alone quite well anyway. It was sezy and emotional and real without being angsty. Thanks!
It is great. I love how he is now determined to get her back. you should write something that is when he finally does get her back if you haven't already
I enjoyed this story but I think you should continue it. I liked it too much for it to end here. Please write a sequel or something. Sincerely, ~Flair Verona~
The End? If he gets her back, how can it be the end?
this is very good and passionate. I like in the end how she is so hurt by his intentions that he feels that he really loves her and wants her back. Very good story. Well Done.
I would love to see another chapter to this story.... just a though.
WOW! very very good! Talk about great lemons!! I would kinda like to see how he goes about getting her back *grin* i see you like the Bill/Hermione pairing too. Keep up the great work! lemons i love lemons!
That was really good. Too bad it's a one shot. Any chance of it becoming more?
I love all your one shots but this one needs resolution. Please write a sequel!
please please please make a sequel :) i love bill/hermione fics and this story just reminded me why. awesome writing. :)
good chapter. should continue.
Well, you can't just end it THERE! Although I have to say Bill will have a hard time getting Hermione back. It'd be interesting to read about him trying...