Date: 08/22/2012 12:53 am Title: Chapter 1
great fun!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. :)
Date: 10/16/2008 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm with Harry, what's the next verse?
Author's Response: I'm afraid that he blew out his candles. We'll never know. Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 08/21/2008 02:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh gosh so incredibly funny! Very clever.
Author's Response: Thank you vey much.
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2008 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! That was hilarious. I saw the comment regarding Alto being a women's voice, and while that may be the case, some people do have wide ranges. I'm in choir, and depending on the song, and who we have, I range from tenor to high soprano. Don't sweat making Bill a little...high pitched. LOL.
Funny. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I simply didn't want everone at the same range. I'm glad you found it amusimg.
[Report This]Date: 01/12/2008 10:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh, god, that was hilarious. I WAS CRACKING FOR HOURS!!!
Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2007 02:48 am Title: Chapter 1
very silly and amusing, thanks. Just one little thing- it's "sing-along" (As in sing along with each other) not "sing-a-long." --- although I suppose they DID sing a long time, so maybe you meant the latter after all and I am out of line.
happy day to you, birthday or not.
Author's Response: Fixed that. Thanks for the comments, it is appreciated.
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2007 12:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Hilarious!!! I did see a bunch of misspellings, but only one real error - Bill singing Alto - alto is a women's voice. I don't think he's, um, lacking his bits, so he'd be either a baritone or bass if not a tenor. Thanks for sharing!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I fixed the alto thing. I don't sing so I didn't know. ;)
I'm glad you liked the story.