[Report This]Date: 09/12/2007 10:26 pm Title: It Is Never Over
I've just found this site and your story. I really like the way you are weaving mystery and romance together. And you catch Fred and George's personalities so well. I hope you will update soon, because I'm very interested in where this is going.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked my story. I love writing stories with the twins. Hoever, I'm sorry to say that this story is complete. I hope I didn't disappoint you.
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2007 07:17 pm Title: It Is Never Over
Just realized that I did not rate this story......
Done!
Author's Response: Thank you. :D
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2007 07:14 pm Title: It Is Never Over
I really enjoyed this story. I just wish it was longer.
An orangutan for a patronus. Excellent choice! :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I was at the zoo and it was the only aminal that seened to fit him.
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:49 pm Title: The Curse
09-02-2007 20:25 Rated 10
Oh, this is getting good. Now we know she is under a curse, but you still haven't connected the stuff from her father yet.
Narine
Author's Response: Give me a bit of time... I will.
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:47 pm Title: Dinner With A Surprise
09-02-2007 20:19 Rated 9
Oh I love the bit with the cake! And I want those trunks. I hope that we find out what she is translating though.
Narine
Author's Response: Oh, yes boys and cake - that was fun to write. We'll see a bit of the translation later on.
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:46 pm Title: The First Invitation
09-02-2007 18:23 Rated 9
I like how you have the twins, you have kept them very close to canon and I like that. The dark shadow - oh, that forshadows a good begining.
Narine
Author's Response: lol Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 03/31/2007 07:45 pm Title: A Familiar Face in Diagon Alley
08-02-2007 00:31 Rated 9
I like the reference to the product of the shop. You seem to have stayed close to canon and yet introduce us to more of Fred and George. I do hope that they and this girl do start to interact some?
Narine
Author's Response: Yes, by the next chapter...