[Report This]Date: 04/12/2008 12:10 am Title: What is and What Will Never Be
This was nicely done. Bill would need Remus to teach him how to deal with "the beast within", and all of the other challenges of his condition. It is a sad irony that "Billy" wrote about the world that the future "Bill" would live in, but it did not make any of it easier.
[Report This]Date: 05/17/2006 05:27 am Title: What is and What Will Never Be
Lovely vignette, I liked the two voices you created--for "Billy" and Bill. And nice touch to tie it back to Remus.
Author's Response: Thank you, harmony_bites! I was leery about Bill's characterisation, so this made my day :)
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2006 01:23 pm Title: What is and What Will Never Be
Lovely story. I am, of course, dying to read the entire essay, and hear Remus' reaction to the words. You left me wanting more, and got me thinking, which was what you meant to do, I'm sure. Bravo.
Author's Response: Thank you, Katie! I'm generally sneaky like that, I must admit ;) I really appreciate you taking the time to read this!
[Report This]Date: 01/25/2006 08:44 am Title: What is and What Will Never Be
This is a very touching piece! I absolutely love the idea of Bill stumbling on a very heartfelt and innocent essay he wrote as a child! Very well done, dear!
Author's Response: Hello, dearest!
Once again, I cannot tell you how much each and every one of your reviews means to me :)
[Report This]Date: 01/18/2006 06:23 pm Title: What is and What Will Never Be
This was a very moving vignette. You managed to convey a lot of intense emotions in a short space. Well done. Strider
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, Strider. I've never written Bill before, and your feedback means a lot to me!
[Report This]Date: 01/14/2006 04:08 pm Title: What is and What Will Never Be
Nice
well written
Author's Response: Thank you, ilikesnape!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2005 10:57 am Title: What is and What Will Never Be
wow, this is a fantastic, moving story. great job :) -severina
Author's Response: Hi severina! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave me feedback ;)