I loved it! Really cute story. I got a kick out of the fact that one of their kids was sorted into Slytherin, thought it's not surprising. Great job.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: Thanks! I think that with Hermione's cunning and Charlies affinity with scaly creatures a Slytherin child is inevitable! lol! I'm so glad that people are STILL reading this. Your review made my day :) Annie :)
I love it! Perfect ammount of fluff.
Author's Response: Aww *schucks*! Thank you for that sweet review. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! *grin*
That's really sweet. I love to read fluff when I'm in the right mood. :) Oh, I really love the title. This is a fav. ship of mine, I also have another fav. Bill/Hermione. Yet, Charlie/Hermione's are just as good.
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review! I also love reading Hermione/Charlie, Hermione/Bill actually, I love reading Hermione stories especially when she's paired with a Weasley although, I still don't really like reading Hermione/Ron unless there's someone else involved aswell!!!!
Thanks again for the really kind words! *hugs*
triplets, poor hermione! I hope they are slytherins! Very cute and sweet and fluffy-thanks!
Author's Response: I'm pretty sure they will be Slytherin's! Especially with Uncle Sevvie there to keep his beady eyes on them! Thanks for the review - I'm glad you liked it! *hugs*
This is my first visit to The Burrow archive. It's very YELLOW over here and a bit jarring to the eyes! Anyway, this is a very sweet story and I love the twist ending. I've always thought Hermione needed someone older (not as old as Severus, mind you!) than Ron. :)
Author's Response: Thanks Sweet! I personnally like the yellow, it could have been all orange!!!! Also for the record: SEVVIE is NOT to old for Hermione!! It does happen in real life, an age difference like that, but I know your just joking!!! p.s. Everyone should head over to Occlumency and read Vocalion's fics as they are fab!!! Ta loads, Annie x :D
The sap! :) It's wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks! Sometimes, all you need is some fluff! :D
Lovely piece of writing. I could almost imagine myself in her feet. Keep the good stuff coming! ;)
Author's Response: With Charlie there with those feet? You'd have to get there before me!!!! Thanks very much hun! All of these reviews are so lovely. Thanks again for leaving your thoughts! *hugs*
This worked well as a one shot; you definitely had all the elements of the story in there so well done. I agree with the comment about the beta. Perhaps also an explanation as to why their house was so Muggle, and why a ranch? I can only assume that is not in England? That is probably the main thing that jars a bit, so it might be something to think about in future stories.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments! I'm not quite sure where the name of their house came from, it was the first thing that popped in my head really! Now I can say that it's called The Ranch due to the fact that there is so much coming and going plus I think that in Romania the western influence would probably have come from the US rather than the UK hence they would likely nickname a reserve the Ranch. It's a bit of a play by me really. I always imagined there house to be in the country with wide open spaces, or at least near the country and I did think it would be in England. The muggle influence I think would stem from both Hermione and Charlie. Hermione has grown up as a muggle-born and she will never loose her roots (in my opinion!) and Charlie grew up with a muggle loving father. I have always seen Charlie as living amongst muggles in his grown up life and I don't think that would change when he has a family. Thanks for the comments about the beta. If I ever write anything I think is worthwhile, I will definitely search for one! *smiles* Thanks again :D
That was a cute story. I could see how one of their kids would be sorted into Slytherin!
Author's Response: Ta very much! I've always had an incling that Hermione would have been a Slytherin if it hadn't been for her brain and her loyalty. I've never been 100% behind the theory that no witch or wizard with muggle-blood down the line, would ever be sorted into the house!!! Tom himself was a half-blood!
Anyhoo, thanks again!!!
nifty!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Excellent story, very sweet! You might want to have a beta look it over. Nothing horrifying, just a few little picky things that interrupt the flow a tad. Fantastic title....It's oh so quiet, shh shh. It's oh so still, shh shh....*giggles*
Author's Response: Thanks! None of my stories are really that good so I've never felt the need to get a beta! This is the only flic I've ever posted to an archive site my others are on ff.net and my LJ because I don't think they're that interesting!
Thanks for the comments though, and I like the title too!!
it was kinda slow, not really much (how do u say it) meat to the story
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, anyway! This one-shot wasn't really meant to be meaty. It was just a wee story about Hermione coming home after a hard days work to find a quiet house and a sexy husband! Thanks for reading tho!!!
oooooo, this is sooo sweet...I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love your stuff, so a review from you means so much! *hugs*
Thanks.
Author's Response: No problem!