[Report This]Date: 11/26/2007 12:16 am Title: Epilogue
great job! I loved reading this fic, it made me laugh the whole way through, in true weasley fashion. I'll be looking for more of your stuff, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm very happy you enjoyed this.
[Report This]Date: 11/14/2007 05:51 pm Title: Epilogue
Beautifully written. Engaging to the end. In short: I loved it. Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I shall.
[Report This]Date: 10/31/2007 05:51 pm Title: Striking Back
Love this story and I cannot wait for the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting too long. Like that Fred called her animagus form Circe, nice touch.
Author's Response: LOL thank you. Actually, he swore ‘Circe!” as Dylan ran from the room – but being the quick thinker that he is, he used that as her name…
My next chapter should be in queue soon. It’s being checked over….
[Report This]Date: 10/28/2007 10:03 am Title: Striking Back
So excited to finally get the next chapter. Thank you! But no sexy encounters in this one; I'm bummed. (Also, why is Fred wearing his tie? I thought he only had on jeans and boots under his robe; please don't disabuse me of that nice image.) Grindylows just don't cut it when we could have more Frederick the Great. I'm worried Mary Ellen is going to spill the beans and get them all in serious trouble now. Make the next chapter come soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. Two more… this story is complete on my thumbdrive… Just going through the process… It’s coming I promise!
[Report This]Date: 10/28/2007 09:55 am Title: Getting Reckless
I love this story. Kind of wish that we had more of a transition from the events of the last chapter, though--I'd like to see how Dylan and Fred both are feeling after finally doing the deed. One reason I thought "A Very Curious Neighbor" was so erotic was seeing the emotions behind the actions--there's nothing like a little guilt, nervousness, fear and longing to make everything more exciting. Just wondering how Dylan is taking it all, and even Fred. I'd assume most teenage fumbles don't turn out quite that intensely; it would be good to see even him knocked out by it. Also kind of wondering how sexual activity is seen at Hogwarts--is most everyone at it? Or is it something you have to hide, to some extent? Does Fred tell George everything? Also, given Dylan's reaction to touching Fred--and the pain she felt in the last chapter--I'm with Fred in raising my eyebrows incredulously that this is not her first sexual encunter. Did she lie about that, and if so, why? And why didn't they use a contraception charm last time? Is that going to be an issue? Finally (and I hope I'm not coming off as critical, because I really am loving this story, just so engrossed in it I want more and want to talk about it!), I have to say I can't believe a guy Fred's age would be at all concerned about wrinkling up from too much time in the water when he has a naked girl wiggling around in his lap to kiss him. He's had enough recovery time.
Author's Response: First, thank you for the lovely comment about my other story, A Very Curious Neighbor. However, this story is a bit different, and I’ll try answering a few of your concerns… a bit. In regards to sex at Hogwarts – I suppose that why the Professors and prefects patrol the corridors at night. Since Fred knows this castle really well I’m sure he knows corners and rooms that even the staff don’t know. Does Fred tell George everything? Dunno. Dylan’s pain her first time with Fred is not uncommon. Just as the first time can hurt – and for some a lot, the second time can be uncomfortable – but not as much pain. The vagina may still need to adjust to the invasion.
AS for having them ‘do it again’ when she is on his lap--- how long did you want the chapter? Yes, he had enough recovery time… I could have very seriously added a second ‘romp’ but thought that the chapter was getting too long – so, he called it quits. There are a number of guys who ‘bone you’ then can’t wait to go to sleep of pull up their pants and goof to find their friends – I didn’t want Fred to be like that.
Anyway I’m glad you are enjoying this story… I do have another chapter in queue…
[Report This]Date: 10/16/2007 11:46 pm Title: Getting Reckless
Another good chap - with a great cliffie of an ending, too. Great job with this fic, beaweasely, it keeps me laughing and wanting more every time!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad youa re enjoying this one. It was fun to write.
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2007 09:10 pm Title: Getting Reckless
I'm really loving this, and I can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. More is to come...
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2007 01:19 pm Title: The Fireworks
Great story, I especially liked the flying pink and silver pigs, nice touch.
I'm abit confused by the previous review by night owl - when was she with both of them? I thought it was only Fred, have I missed something?
Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review.
There are a few times when Dylan is with Fred and George, in their dormitory and in the Room of Requirement, the guys tease Dylan about having a three-some. (The pink and silver pigs fit one of Dylan's requirements she made before she'd even consider it.) But yes, ever since Fred gave her the Nose-Bleed Nougart, Dylan's been hooked up with Fred. (In his mind, ever since the first kiss on his bed...)
[Report This]Date: 10/09/2007 11:03 am Title: The Conspirators
I read this a while ago when you first posted the first few chapters, been meaning to review but real life had other ideas. Anyway, it's a really funny story, nice work. There is a nice pace, lots of humour and you have the twins mischievious, playful natures down pat. Particularly like the midnight meeting in the Griffindor dorms - boys and their one track minds. Rushing off to read the remaining chapters!
Author's Response: I appreciate that you left such a nice review, thank you. I'm glad to read that you are enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 04:09 pm Title: The Fireworks
They are loverly. ^^ 'Specially dragons.
Author's Response: I only wish I could've been there to see the show! Ah, well, we can still use our imagination.
[Report This]Date: 10/05/2007 12:08 am Title: The Fireworks
Beautifully written so far, and I love the title for chapter 7; it's so fitting, for both scenes. Can't wait for the next one!!
~MxC
Author's Response: Thank you. I just love foreworks, don't you?
[Report This]Date: 10/04/2007 11:43 pm Title: The Fireworks
This story was wonderful. I didn't realize how much so until I got to the end and realized how disappointed I was that it was over. Bravo. Excellent work.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. It's not over yet... a few more to go. I'll post the next chapter as soon as I can.
[Report This]Date: 09/20/2007 09:44 pm Title: The Fireworks
Oh, excellent, I am so glad to see how things are progressing - I thought she'd be too modest to be with both of them. Great job on this one, I'll be waiting for more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like how I've taken this - and yes, they are progressing. I'll post soon I promice. Just give me a moment as I have it checked over.
[Report This]Date: 09/12/2007 04:21 am Title: Another Visit
Only five more chapters left)= I don't want it to end! But I also want to read more!! My favourite twin has always been George, but the more I read it the more I fall for Fred! LOL(= Can't wait till the next chapter is up!(=
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I love both twins actually, Fred just got lucky in this story. Yes, sorry I wrote ten chapters and an epologue.But I give you enough in the epilogue to know how things might go on...
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2007 10:57 pm Title: Another Visit
Keep it coming... This is the only story I'm watching right now and can't wait to see where it goes. A little bit of fluff, my favorite twins, and torturing The Toad... can't get much better then that.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the kind review. As soon as I get the next chapt from my beat - I will post. This story has two more chapters to go.
Author's Response: Oops - I meant ten chapters - I took this to the end of the book... then an epilogue.
[Report This]Date: 08/25/2007 12:01 am Title: Another Visit
Ohh, I just love a light fluffy after a long day, don't you? Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad I could provide you with the fluff!
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2007 01:50 am Title: The Water Demons
Ooh, what now? Not only are they (kinda) caught, but Fred kissed her, and good. What's George gonna do? Great fic, it always keeps me laughing!
Author's Response: I'm very happy you are enjoying this one. Chapter six will be in queue in a short while.
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2007 07:49 am Title: The Water Demons
i love those two mischievous conniving twins! oh and fred! (his charm makes me miss him even more!) anticipating the next chapter!(=
Author's Response: I know! I love typing about the twins! DH made me cry. I'm glad you are enjoying my story. Next chapt. will go in queue soon -
[Report This]Date: 08/12/2007 12:05 pm Title: The Conspirators
I can't stop reading! Can't wait for the next chapter!!(=
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have the entire story - all the chapters done.... just going through the beta process.
[Report This]Date: 07/16/2007 05:42 pm Title: The Conspirators
I love this fic! Keeps you laughing the whole way through, whether at the Toad's inept raging or the raging hormones of teenagers. Great job, I'll be looking for the next post!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it. I will post the next chapter as soon as I can...
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2007 11:14 pm Title: The Second Try
I'm really enjoying this story and all the fun the twins seems to get into! Please continue it I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm very glad you like this story. Next chapters will come... I promice.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2007 11:13 pm Title: The Second Try
I'm really enjoying this story and all the fun the twins seems to get into! Please continue it I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Next chapter will come - I promise.
[Report This]Date: 06/21/2007 01:25 am Title: Curious As A Cat
This is good! Please update soon!
Author's Response: The story is a complete one - just going through the beta process. I promice...
[Report This]Date: 06/07/2007 11:54 pm Title: Curious As A Cat
I love it! I'm always serching for a well written Weasley fanfic (most of which are hard to come by) and it looks like I found it! Please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I never abandon a story. This story is fully written, and in the process of correcting my typing errors with my beta. Have patience with me... it will come!