all right, femme slash! there's not enough of hermione/ginny art or fics, as far as i'm concerned. keep doing what you're doing!
wow interesting take, I definitely liked it though, great job! I can just picture Hermione flipping out in the common room lol.
The clitoris thing was just too weird. There have been some fairly far-fetched plot twists by involving magic with sex, but this one just borderlines bizaare. The story was too short, as well. Hermiony and Ginny could be really hot together. I'd love for you to rework this one and continue the story.
Ehm. No. Really. The clitoris thing was rather disgusting. I also don't like it when the characters are 'out of character'. You know, with them saying 'fuck' and 'what the hell' and that sort of thing, and just... they way they act is completely unlike JK's characters.
i like slash and i read femslash from time to time. i just couldn't "get" into this one... there is some hot smut but i dont think this is one of them. i think the clitoris thing might be a bit overdone. there's something else but i cant quite put my finger on it... just in case you think im flaming or sth, im not just giving you a review with what i really think.
very hot i love this story
please write more
OOH, now that was VERY sexy. I'm not usually into female-slash, but this was superb!