when by chance will the next chapter come?
You really need to write a second chapter with Snape in it!!!! That would be brilliant!!! He's the dominant type and would just love to call all the shots, never one to be topped, but to see Remus control him would be delicious!!!
"He needs to lighten up," Remus agreed, "Pehaps we should invite him around for tea." hahaha! great ending to a great story.
Great humour mixed in there. My oh my. Perhaps not particularly believable, but you don't hear me protesting.
Loved this! And I'd REALLY love to read what you'd make Snape do...
you should write a sequel with ss 'invited for tea'! that would be great. this was great!
HEEHEEHEE!! So cool!
You know, I am not a fan of Remus and Hermione at all. I actually have a palpable negative reaction to it, like a massive "Yuck!" *however* I enjoy Bill/Hermione and even Bill/Remus, so I decided to give your fic a try. I will say that it was worth it. I can repeat some of the funny parts that others have pointed out (here, the Burrow, wherever) but no matter what... a great fic with good sparring and sparking between the characters.
Ooh, wonderful story!!! Please, feel free to invite Snape to tea (hint hint) :)
Excellent! I love the bit at the end about Snape, I'm still having a good laugh about that. Ooh, you should write another with Sevvie-pooh involved. Everyone loves a naked Snape...At least I do.
~lol~ that was awesome .. later for now angel
oh my..this was fantastic! you got me wet and all...
Magnifiscent!! Try posting it on www.livejournal.com/community/books_frecles... They will love it as much as i did...
LOL! That is bloody brilliant! Inviting Snape for tea....oooh please do ;p
Definately better than some of the pwp I have read on this site!! I love you caught me up in the story without going directly to the sex. That can be a tough sell. I also really like the way you played up the alpha male side to remus. My favorite line: “Oh, I think we'll both get our answers,” he said cryptically.
That was pretty hot
Now that is somethng I'd like to read - bill remus and Hermione take on and take out Snape!
That was good. I love the little Snape twist at the end. Haha.
I loved it. I am leaving now to see what else you have written.
the last bit made me laugh!
Hahaha! I can imagine the look on Snape's face!!
Yes...Bring Snape in. YES.s.s.s.s..s
Author's Response: There could be a sequel :D
God damn, that was marvelous! "Bossy she could do" Hehehehe... that just got me, and the end was just the cherry on top, Bill calling Hermione and Remus nutters... I'd love it if you wrote another one like this...
Author's Response: Yay for Bossy Hermione! I'm glad you liked :D
Well, may I say that was quite fun. I have a secret yen for Bill/Hermione... after my other yens for Snape/Hermione and Draco/Hermione. And I much prefer a bolder Remus (I loathe the wimpy version). Having said all this, I just had to point out my favorite section of this...
And everyone knew that werewolves were insatiable lovers. It was on page 394 of their third-year text.
If one read between the lines very carefully, that is.
Author's Response: Hee, I'm glad that line amused you as much as it did me. and Bill/Hermione makes me happy , too!