[Report This]Date: 06/23/2007 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I normally don't like PWP, but I liked this one- because it DID have something fo a plot. I especially loved your descriptions- this may seem an odd comment to make for a PWP story, but my favorite description was the one of Ginny twirling around in her dress. It was so innocently sensual and made a truly lovely image.
Also, the title was AWESOME, as was the quote it came from. Perfect!
Author's Response: I'm sorry for the looong delay in responding - the alert must have got lost in the shuffle :}
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and I was hoping some of that tension and sensuality I imagined while I was writing came through. Thank you for the lovely review
[Report This]Date: 07/21/2006 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
The only thing I have to say that could be improved is that you changed tenses in the middle. Besides that, it ws intense and emotional--very gripping. The part where Harry tells Ginny that he just can't do this any more...that was so moving. This was very well done.
Strider
Author's Response: I think I may have to get this beta'd. Maybe if I ever get around to writing the follow up I'll get around to it. Thanks for the review :)
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2005 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Yep, works for me!
One minor point - you keep shifting in tense from past to present. I could understand just, say, the smut bit being in present tense - maybe a divider (row of asterisks or something) between? But not within one paragraph!
Author's Response: *hangs head* Yes, Aunty Marion, I promise to do better next time ;)
[Report This]Date: 08/31/2005 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really nice. I loved it. Cindy
Author's Response: Thanks :)
[Report This]Date: 08/11/2005 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
WHOA. Fantastic! Where's my cold shower?
Author's Response: I'm glad it seems to have worked out. I usually only write innuendo, but a PWP without smut is sort of sad.
[Report This]Date: 08/10/2005 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
aaahhh! Loved it! It was perfect...the right combination of everything! Brilliant, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Eek - this was supposed to be set as complete. However, there may be a short, slightly humorous epilogue to this, once I've wrestled a Snapecentric fic I had almost complete into being HBP compliant. Thanks for such lifting review.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2005 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw. I love post-Hogwarts Harry/Ginny stories.
Author's Response: Thank you :)