I doubt you will see this so long after the posting....but do you have this posted anywhere else...or could it be posted on here. Because owl.tauri.org no longer exists and I REALLY want to read the rest of this fic!

I had never thought of them two as a couple. I think that was well writen and you didn't have it progress to fast like alot of people do. I liked it.

I'll just read chapter one... but this pairing has always been a possible for me.... or Charlie and Herms. Nice beginning, even if it starts "sad" - so difficult, just to start off with canon.

OOO please up date ASAP I love your story!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! The rest is on owl.tauri.org along with a sequel! I will not be posting the rest of the story here.

awe how cute i think a coupling with hermione and bill is cute. i have read some stories with this hook-up and liked what i've read. the most importnat thing is to be a great writer or else this couople would really suck--however you have nothing to fear it already sounds great--looking foward to reading more mariann

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying my little story! These crazy kids have been bumping around in my head for about 15 more chapters. You can find them on owl.tauri.org

Awww. Is that the end? If not, please continue! Cute fic.

Author's Response: Hee hee! Nope, that's not the end. The rest of the story is on owl.tauri.org. Oh, and the beginning of a sequel as well!

NOOOOO!!!! Please don't leave this fic here long.... what a great story!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. The rest of the story (12 chapters) is written and posted on owl.tauri.org I will not be posting more of this story here.

Oh, I like the direction this is going! I figured that yew branch Bill found must be for something special. And thank you so much for giving Orion an actual purpose in the story, instead of just having a baby there for its own sake! I really like the way you're writing Bill. It's a convincing portrayal of someone who's fighting with contradictory urges to both isolate himself and to get closer to others. Just don't forget to tell us all about his scars. Because chicks dig scars!

Author's Response: You're very welcome. Stay tuned, there might be some scars coming up... ::shifty eyes::

What a very nice set-up. I like that Molly isn't a screaming harridan (something of a fanon convention which I particularly loathe,) and Bill's internal dialogue is beautifully done. I also liked that he's so utterly changed from the 'cool' Weasley, to a battered and bruised man slowly taking steps onto a new life path. Additionally, Hermione's entrance was perfect. She's a guest, but really a member of the family, and her affection for her surroundings is obvious. I really look forward to where you decide to take this.

What is MNFF?

Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughtful review. I think carefully about characterization, so I'm touched that you noticed my work.

MNFF is MuggleNet Fan Fiction. For Valentine's Day I ran a scavenger hunt where members of the forums had to find stories featuring particular rarepair ships, and leave reviews for them. Forum members played for house points, and moderators played for an original fic written on the ship of their choice. I meant for the prize to be a light one-shot, but how can you pair up Bill and Hermione without it being an affair, jailbait, or completely OOC? My pride wouldn't allow those options...

Great first chapter I look forward to reading more

Author's Response: Thanks! This isn't my usual genre, or ship, so I appreciate your feedback!