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Reviewer: queenp Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2005 04:19 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Tell your muse to get her butt back home where she can do her job...Bora Bora is not a good location for her...Understand the RL small window..am desperately seeking teaching position for fall...That being said, chapter was good transition-ish chapter--short, to the point, shifting of plot, etc. Looking forward to more..Can't wait to see what is going on w/Bill and can't wait for the discussion w/Ginny...update again ASAP!!

Reviewer: droxy Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 08:18 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Oh that's so romantic, makes me want to fall for Bill too. Good luck on you Hogwarts interview. The Floo department is driving me nuts!

Reviewer: zambonigirl Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2005 03:26 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Woot! You updated! Go Bill! But I'm rooting for Charlie, too. I'm mostly just happy you updated. And I totally understand about Real Life Adventures. Nice to know you're still alive.

Reviewer: spaz141 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 11:45 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Sassara Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 01:07 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

More...more...more...more...more...more...did I mention I want some more! =-)

Reviewer: SiriusLives689 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 12:16 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Very nice postcard, indeed. ~ angela

Reviewer: missybewitched Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 01:25 am Title: Bill Comes to Visit

i sometimes find that short chapters work as well as longer ones. in fact, they sometimes work way better. i love this chapter because there is so much tension and im positively drooling over the possibilites of the next chapter. Hope things clear up with work. I know exactly how much teachers are expected to do and i feel for you.

Reviewer: missybewitched Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/29/2005 01:24 am Title: Bill Comes to Visit

i sometimes find that short chapters work as well as longer ones. in fact, they sometimes work way better. i love this chapter because there is so much tension and im positively drooling over the possibilites of the next chapter. Hope things clear up with work. I know exactly how much teachers are expected to do and i feel for you.

Reviewer: Atropos4 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 10:28 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

awww so short. Can't wait for more. :D

Reviewer: wiliranii Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 01:10 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

i love your story its so intriging

Reviewer: pickles Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 12:38 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

A great big THANK YOU for this update... I'm sorry I forgot you were a teacher... The end of the school craziness. All the muse sent you was one postcard... I think you will need to put the muse in a corner chained to the desk... It doesn't take much for a postcard.. a stamp an i'm enjoying myself wish you were here... well i guess its better than getting a t-shirt that says "my muse went to bora bora and all the muse brought me back was this lousy t-shirt" lol great chapter.. yes short but at least we aren't hanging on a cliff by our fingertips.. i'm sure those will come later.. how much does Bill know of his brothers wooing Hermione? well its time to get lunch ready.. have a good weekend..

Reviewer: JTBJAB Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2005 02:29 am Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Oh man, please update soon!

Reviewer: anyah_daoc Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 10:52 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

I am loving it thus far. I am looking forward to more. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: stormi Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 06:19 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Thanks for updating. Hope your muse comes back soon.

Reviewer: Tedabug Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 01:01 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Just the right amount of teasing to bring me back for the next chapter. Overall the story is absolutely addicting.

Reviewer: Lyndie578 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 12:13 pm Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Nice little morsel of suggestive goodness. Has you muse hinted whether Hermoine with actually permanently end up with any of one (or two) of the Weasley men? Well, if she's only just sent you a postcard, she probably won't even deign to comment on something like that. Thanks for the post!

Reviewer: spitfirecrackre Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 10:49 am Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Yes, short that was but thanks for making the time!

Reviewer: winna Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 09:58 am Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Nice transition, despite the lack of Bill flavored lemons. Just take care of real life and your muse will return someday, all tan, relaxed, and ready to write. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Black_lust_z Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 09:39 am Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Thanks for the update, and don’t worry about the time between you’re last update...we all have our separate life’s. I look forward to the next chapter, keep up the amazing work. *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*

Reviewer: Black_lust_z Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 09:39 am Title: Bill Comes to Visit

Thanks for the update, and don’t worry about the time between you’re last update...we all have our separate life’s. I look forward to the next chapter, keep up the amazing work. *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*

Reviewer: Spryte Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 09:02 am Title: Bill Comes to Visit

"You can have anything you want"... What a loaded statement! Wow, I wish there was more this chapter, but yeah, I know about real life. I'll be patient and wait for another chapter from you in this wonderful story...

Reviewer: Melvacaea Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2005 08:26 am Title: Bill Comes to Visit

*Squee* It's about time! What if I send you a postcard? Will that help? Dear Dryad: The sun is shining, the sand is white and stained with something yellow... hm, walking away. Oh look rumpled towels. And a very well placed umbrella... whoops, there it goes! Got ideas now? *cough* Yes, I'm begging you to continue. -Mel

Reviewer: pickles Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2005 07:56 pm Title: Grasping Reality

please update.

Reviewer: pickles Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2005 01:08 am Title: Grasping Reality

is it time to update???

Reviewer: Gwendolyne Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2005 06:43 pm Title: Grasping Reality

I like it so far... Continue please?

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