Reviewer: Strider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 09:51 pm Title: Surprises

I love the bet! That's great! You'd think these men would know by now not to underestimate the women in their lives. Anyway...can't wait to see... Strider

Reviewer: Strider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 3

Now, I think Hermione would give Percy a chance. He's not all bad, and she has admired him in the past. But, I like the way you sort of plant the seed in her mind. Strider

Reviewer: Strider Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2005 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so clever! Everyone is brilliantly in character. I can't wait to see how this unfolds. Strider

Reviewer: slashaddict Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/20/2005 05:03 pm Title: Double Your Pleasures

Hmmm... Very interesting! Can't wait to see what Percy, Bill & Charlie try! slasher :)

Reviewer: pickles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2005 12:41 am Title: Double Your Pleasures

Excellent. I like how she got into business mode at the end of the chapter. I'm sure there will be some more making the bed latter. Also question - Since she has a lust potion through her body- Do you think it would be possible for the man who is drinking her nectar to become influenced by it? just an idea... Keep up the good work. Patty

Reviewer: CelticWolfster Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2005 04:55 am Title: Twins Come to Call

Oh what a hussy!!! Hee Hee!! Something tells me that Fred and George are in for quite an adventure! LMAO!!! CelticWolfster

Reviewer: CelticWolfster Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2005 04:51 am Title: Morning Visit

Oh man this just keeps getting better and better with each Chapter! CelticWolfster

Reviewer: CelticWolfster Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2005 04:32 am Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams

Falls off chair laughing! Especially where Bill is concerned! Oh you got them down pat in character!! Hmmmm think I'll place odds on either Bill or Charlie hee hee! Great chapter! CelticWolfster

Reviewer: blaze_of_fae Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2005 01:09 pm Title: Double Your Pleasures

that was a yummy lemon, but you have to update again soon. I really am enjoying this story.

Reviewer: Cherdy the Molologist Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2005 09:00 pm Title: Double Your Pleasures

lovely lemons....can't wait for more!

Reviewer: droxy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2005 10:11 pm Title: Double Your Pleasures

Wicked!!

Reviewer: Spryte Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2005 09:39 am Title: Double Your Pleasures

Gah! What a shame indeed! That was marvelous! Never underestimate the power of a know-it-all! :) Worth the wait, I assure you. I can't wait for your next chapter if this was any example...

Reviewer: blah_blah_blah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2005 12:48 am Title: Double Your Pleasures

I like this story and I don’t.

I enjoy your style of writing. You can spell; you have good grammar and great dialogue. And the sex scene was great!

I would love to be caught between the twins…but what is really happening here?

First, Hermione was with Ron--then Fred & George. And if you story goes where I think it is going then we will see a visit from Percy and Bill.

Then poor Charlie comes in last. Sloppy 5th’s? Who is going to fall in love with that mess?

Please tell me that Ginny, Molly & Arthur are not going to get in on the action.

Author's Response: I just felt I had to respond. Thank you for the polite way you have brought up your concerns.

First. NO. the brothers are quite enough thank you...though that being said, just because there's no 'action' doesn't mean they won't be present or have a voice in the story.

In addition...I did warn that Hermione would be a bit OOC...but even so, i promise now; she will not be sleeping with everyone(in a side note, i never said she slept with Ron), and in the end, she will fall in love with one of them.

As to what is really happening? Just what it looks like...the twins were in for a bit of fun, hermione recognized it, and called them on it. A good time (very unserious) was had by all, and now the boys are realizing that it might have been more interesting as something long term, but it just really couldn't happen after the events which occurred.