What a great plot! I can't wait to find out what will happen next... I hope Hermione chooses Charlie, whatever it is he has planned! Great work, I hope you update again soon, though after reading previous reviews, I'm a little worried it will take a while... Pleaaaase update as soon as possible!
YIPPPEEE!!!!!!!!! An update. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. I'm glad to see you are still around. Thought something frightful might have happened. The date sounds very promising. Hopefully it will be better than my worstest date. okay i'll tell you maybe give your muse a little kick. Set up by girlfriend. Her ex boyfriend. (1st mistake). He couldn't find my house. (2nd mistake). Stepfather had to drop me off at a gas station at the bottom of the mountain to meet him. (3rd mistake). We were going to the movies. But since he couldn't find my home we were late for movie. Saw a different one. (Throw Momma from the train). Stupid movie. He was to have a place picked out for us to eat. (4th mistake). He took me to Mc D's drive thru (5th mistake). Then parked on side street (#6). Then informed me that he took brother's truck without asking and would I mind if he dropped me off at my Mom's place at work since he needed to get truck back before it was noticed - gone. Then he told my girlfriend the next time we would go out I would get a kiss and not some peck on the cheek. Needless to say he didn't get that second chance. My friend was glad he at least shaved. I hope you enjoyed that. Think that would inspire something. hope so. What have you been up to? Keep in touch. Drop a line to say hi i'm still alive.. :o) Patty PS forgive me i didn't know this had been updated.
This is so cool. I am cheering for Charlie, he's my favorite. I hope you update soon, I can't wait to see what Charlie has planned.
Oh, yay..yay! I'd almost given up hope on this one! I am so glad you've continued... Still totally looking forward to how you weave this one!
YIPPEE!!! an update...although it's been up and I've not had the time to read it...I'm glad your muse decided to visit for a bit...maybe you can convince her to stay with you for an extended holiday. :D
I can't wait to see what you have planned...please update again sooN!
Hey! I really like this story. To be honest, I won't to able to choose. Bill and Charlie are both very interesting and sexy characters. Poor Mione! But at least after Ron, the twins and Ginny it's easy to send Percy away. Sure, she won't take him! Hope you'll finish the story but take your time. It's better to have a good story that takes some time between the updates than having a rushed and bad version.
i really like your story, your ideas and that you didn't let Percy play in the game... ;)
I really like your story, so far. I'm glad your moving fairly quickly. When I first began your story, I thought you might force HG to date every single bloody Weasley. I like how you've managed to narrow it down to the two rather fast, but not without important details and plot development. I found this story b/c one of your stories recommended it. I also like how you handled the RWHG breakup. Usually, I don't like how RWHG relationships are written. You surprised me on that one.
I'm sooooo happy that you didn't let Percy into the mix. *urp*, I don't think I could stomach reading about that particular brother. He gives me the willies. lol I certainly don't know how she is going to choose between the two handsom brothers. I never could.
*pouts* It was brilliant, as always -- and I privately think I know who's "winning" Hermione. But I shall zip my lips and wait eagerly for the next update, where Bill and Charlie's surprises arrive... oh and Percy. Er. Percy. Wow. -Mel
So glad to see that you had updated. Can't wait to see where this goes!
I was so glad to see a new installment of the saga. I know which one I'm hoping will win her, but am looking forward to a long, hard-fought courtship.
You're alive!!!! Anyway, can't wait to read what happens although I'm mostly waiting for the Charlie/Hermione moments.
Brilliant story so far...your muse should be fed 3 square meals a day and treated well to encourage more plot bunnies!! Hurry and update please, I have such a dull existance that I NEED this! LOL;o)X
ooooooo Poor Hermione with the surprises. I'm very curious where he takes her. ^_^
Happy to see the update; I really thought you had forgotten about this one. Don't forget us, we are still hanging on to this story. Cheers!
Yay an update! What did Percy say? I sit here waiting for more Bill.
great update, but more soon would be wonderful!
Fabulous story! As much of a fan of the twins that I am, I really am rooting for Charlie. Can't wait till the next chapter!
Oh, yay, I'm so glad I checked to see if you updated... please update again soon!
Charlie... tres delicious, that one! But I wouldn't throw rocks at Bill, either. I'm so glad to see you've updated this fabulous fic! May you muse remain inspired - and if not, ply her with Honeydukes' finest semisweet! Cheers, Michelle
Well, it looks like Bill is the favorite - Bill has ease in both Muggle-Wizard settings, she can relate to curse-breaking more than dragon-keeping, he's creative.... but I'm sorry you glossed over the Percy chat! That sounded interesting. Thanks for updating!
please please please please Please Please Please continue soon cos i'm having a mental break-down already. i'm rooting for charlie, but im a rabid hermione/Bill shipper... hehe... but charlie loves her in this!!
I love it so! Update soon, as a gift of the season to all your admirers, please!
LOL - LOVE this story!!! I just found it, and think it's quite brilliant & clever. Can't wait for the next installment... ~Michelle