[Report This]Date: 02/25/2005 04:16 am Title: Morning Visit
Gah! More now.
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2005 11:28 pm Title: Morning Visit
*smirk* I can just feel a hermione sandwich coming on... Hehehehe... I can't wait for the next chapter either! Hope your writer's block clears up... :)
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2005 10:59 pm Title: Morning Visit
I loved that line in the last chapter about Snape ... even as an HG/SS lover, it just reminded me of the chance that ship has of actually working, none, ...but anyway ... I love this story. It is great. I can't wait to see what the twins do.
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2005 10:42 pm Title: Morning Visit
Fred and George are hilarious and too, too cute! I'm sure each brothers attempt at seduction will be fabulous. I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2005 10:35 pm Title: Morning Visit
Whose on first? I'm on first...again...back in the saddle... Fun, can't wait for the next! Angela
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2005 10:33 pm Title: Morning Visit
yay that was fun, will be waiting as patiently as i can for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2005 10:17 pm Title: Morning Visit
Lol! How could you not be looking forward to the next chapter! Short, yes, but there are some yummy thoughts for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 02/24/2005 10:14 pm Title: Morning Visit
I like this story...a lot! I like the idea of a friendly competition and in large families the baby always catches it from the older siblings.
[Report This]Date: 02/23/2005 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Just read the first chapters, great story. I'll be sure to check back to see your updates!
[Report This]Date: 02/21/2005 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
i love the whole hermione/any weasley but ron or ginny ship ....and this is well written good story. great job so far and please please please keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 02/20/2005 02:35 am Title: Chapter 3
like the chapter but it was a bit short don't you think. thanks for the update. keep up the good work. yeah i could see hermione's arm getting twisted to say the little bit about snape.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2005 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
Aw, I hoped you'd give us a plot twist where Hermione wound up with Snape *pouts*. Oh, well, there's a jillion stories at Ashwinder I can read for that, I guess the Weasleys need a shot at her *grin*. I really like Reasonable!Ron, and I can't wait to see how all the boys try to attract Hermione. Great story so far (in spite of the total lack of Potions Masters).
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2005 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
I blow, I have been so good at being the first review...boo hoo, anyhow, loverly, as usual! OK, so we know who is interested, we also know that Ron, you're right, eventually act like a grown up, has not pitched the "git fit", we have Crooks approval to move forward so....what are you waiting for? An engraved invitation?? Love ya, Dry!
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2005 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Damn, no Snape? Oh crap. Well, this is "the burrow" so there is truth in advertising. ;> But you could pop in the Professor as a side, but not a romatic interest. I think Percy would be a good match for HG. The Ron breakup scene was well done, and interesting. You don't mention that they uhm er had sex. ;> Would be fun to have Molly pop off at Ron. ;> I'm sure this is going to as good and entertaining as any of your SS/HGs so I am here for the ride. Just include lots of kissing!! Oh yes, more kissing! PS- Looking for growing attractiona t the garage sales but have not found it. Did find some Harlequins where the man is arrogant, domineering, a bit mean.
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2005 11:57 am Title: Chapter 3
The way you make scenes solid is wonderful. Writing certain actions can give very strong indications to a person’s mood, and you use that well. The mood you create in the first sentence is kept by her retrospective on the discussion with Ron. Not to complain about the dialogue, I enjoyed reading Ron being flustered and trying to convince Hermione to date one of his brothers, but it strikes me as a little unlikely. I’m grateful that you didn’t turn Ron into a jerk! I see your portrayal of their relationship as highly likely. The feel-good factor is really high in your story. I assume that this is what you’re aiming for as well, since it’s labelled fluff and romance. It’s hard to come up with constructive comments, since it’s very well written. I don’t want to see it changed, so I’ll just end this by telling you how much I enjoy each new chapter. Have fun writing, Delphit
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2005 02:23 am Title: Chapter 3
Very nice set up. :D So she is interested in one of the older Weasley boys eh? Gee I hope the twins won't be too dissapointed. ;)
[Report This]Date: 02/19/2005 12:32 am Title: Chapter 3
I only have two complaints: (1) too short--I want more! and (2) update faster woman! FASTER! (again relating to my desire for more). Very nice. I actually like it better when things between Hermione and Ron end amicably. All of the Ron-bashing that goes on is a bit annoying. Not that I have anything against Ron. I just happen to enjoy aggressive, possessive, snarky Slytherins more. (I laughed at your Snape comment.) If Ron was your average Big Sexy (re: confident) Male, then I might like him more. Anyway, on the topic ofyour story, I'm a bit sad that you seem to be writing off Gred and Forge as just a fling. I'm rather fond of them and the trio concept with Hermione. Two is always better than one, right? However, as I like all the older Weasleys, I guess I won't complain...too much. Looking forward to (some) smut! (That was my not-so-subtle hint). Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2005 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yes! Very nice to see Ron shown in a good light for a change (even if he's being such hormonal teenage boy) and the breakup being amicable. I'm soooo eager to read more.
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2005 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like it! Write more soon please.
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2005 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 3
*sigh* I am now officially anticipating the next chapter as much as "The Phantom of the Opera" on DVD (in other words, "Now! Now! I want it right now! *stomps foot*). I love the amicable break up of Ron and Hermione. Now it's much less likely that he will realize that he's a prat and want her back. Can you tell I'm not a Ron fan? :) Keep up the lovely work. I grovel adoringly at your feet for the next chapter (or 20 *grin*).
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2005 10:48 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh, what a great way to continue! It is really very cool that they broke up so amiably! I think it will make everything that much more fun! I am so looking forward to your next posting!
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2005 10:42 am Title: Chapter 3
Wonderful! I loved the way they parted. I get really tired of reading of Ron as a prat all the time. This is a wonderful set-up for the story, and I wanna read more! Pretty-please???
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2005 09:02 am Title: Chapter 3
No complaints here. (Though I do like the occasional well written SS/HG) It was a good set up chapter, but it made me want to read chapter 4, which, unfortunately, isn't up! Grrr... I always figured Hermione would be up for a good challenge, but then again, she'd also prefer older, more *seasoned* men too... I really want to see whom she chooses to persue, and how they all go about it in the first place...
[Report This]Date: 02/18/2005 03:26 am Title: Chapter 3
I loved that the parting was amicable. I agree with the Percy comment he is not may favorite Weasley. I can't wait to see who is knocking at her door and how she reacts to being chased after by all the male Weasleys.
[Report This]Date: 02/17/2005 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yummy, more please? ;)