Aw, I think your Ron's lovely. But, okay, now that he's out of the picture, let's get down to some Weasley lovin' business. I have to tell you, this story has me in quite a distressed state. I'm in such a dither, trying to decide who I'd rather see Hermione end up with. Bill and Charlie are just so...dreamy, and are old enough to thoroughly appreciate her finer qualities. Percy is so...stuffy and cute, though! (I'm a very recent browser of the possibilities of the Perce and Hermione ship.) But Hermione and one (or *ahem* both) of the twins...*sigh* Her wit and wisdom with their humor and charm. They'd be unstoppable. And hot. Maybe what Hermione really needs is a Weasley harem! Yes, yes! That's the solution I've been looking for all along!
Nice chapter! I am really liking how this story is starting out, and can't wait to read about the antics of the Weasley boys....
wonderful... can't wait to read the different approaches each weasley will take... however, would love to see gin gin catch on and scold or help one of the bros catch on, I don't dislike ron, yet at the same time let the spoils go to the victor and may the victor be showered in gold...
I'm very excited about this story! We get to see ALL the Weasleys trying to get Hermione. Fantastic! Also, I really like seeing which ones have "real" feelings for her and all that. Good job. Update soon!
NEED MORE!! MUST HAVE MORE!! you are absolutely brilliant with this dear! i love how you've done the point of view of all the lads, really captured them very well. hope you update soon! *nudge, nudge; hint, hint; say no more, say no more* lia
This makes me laugh and smile--in a good way! I love your HG/SS stories, but this is great! I will be checking every chance I get to see if you've updated this! I've always prefered the older ones myself--so much more to play with, broader base of experience! I cannot wait to see were this goes or, should I say, where this doesn't go. Give your muse a big box of Valentine's chocolates from me! Thanks, Dryad!
I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out. I just love the idea of the Weasley men all pining (lusting) after Hermione. Please continue!!!
I think you should get on with the writing, right now! :) This is good stuff. The Weasleys are usually not my flavour (I like snarkier men, ie Snape), but when I saw that you had written it I had to read it and so far I am very pleased with that decision. It's going to be nice to see Hermione make an appearance. Are you going to make an effort to keep her canon? (Pushy? Who, me?) I've seen some fic (not yours as far as I remember) where she's been written as a Mary Sue. Ick. Seriously, what needs improving on a girl as feisty and bright as Hermione? ;) You must have had a blast writing this. I love the way the twins reason that they're a package deal ;) Hermione just might be the only woman alive (Yes, yes, I know she's not technically alive, but let's not be obnoxious here. It's rather unfair to be prejudiced against a person just because they're fictional.) who could handle that much mischief. It does have its possibilities though... No glaring errors in spelling or grammar. Good structure and flow in sentences. The dialogue is spunky and amusing. I have good hope that this will be a hilarious and creative multi chapter fic. *Makes with the puppy eyes*...you will continue writing it, won't you? :) Sorry that this is so long, I get all enthusiastic when I read something good. /Del
Oh, I am so in love with this story, it's not even funny. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I can't wait for the next chapter...Any idea how long the story'll be when it's all said and done? (Just curious.)
That was marvellous! I loved it. Up date soon please. :D
Oh, I love it! Each one of the guys thought on Hermione was absolutely fabulous. I'm torn between Charlie and Bill now though. And maybe even poor staid Percy getting the girl. Great update.
awww! come on! don't leave us hanging!!! that just cruel! :( but really good otherwise ;)
Excellent Bunny!!!!! keep going...but don't forget about What I Want! Good Luck!
If Bill doesn't get her, can I have him? I love yummy dream lemons, smut, whatever!
WHOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Go Charlie go!
ps i happen to be married to a Bill. lol
Well .... What do I think??? mmmm That's easy. This is going to be a fun story. But what about baby brother.when will he catch wind of what's going on.. or is he too busy off chasing other skirts.. i could see her with charlie or bill. waiting for more. thank you for a new story to read.
oh those looks to be fun. onto the next chapter
Keep up the good work. I can't wait for more of this story. I vote for Charlie or Bill. I like Hermione Charlie pairing as much as Hermione Snape pairings...
Gah! Only the second chapter, and I'm already checking daily for updates. I absolutely love the direction this story is going. You write all of the Older!Weasleys so well. Although, I am usually a Percy-hater, I actually don't mind him in this one (which says a lot). The twins are great too, but you've made me fall in love with Charlie and Bill. Not surprising, considering their my faves, but Charlie's thoughts almost brought tears to my eyes. Poor unloved man, send him my way! :) Bill's dream was so passionate and you can tell he really cares as well. With so many wonderful men lining up, how's a girl supposed to choose? I can't wait to see how Hermione reacts. Keep up the wonderful work and please, please, please update soon!
Damn well at least I had a little bit of Bill/Hermione action even if it was a dream. Can you tell I'm rooting for Bill? Great chapter I just loved the twins.
Gee, it's almost more like a character study of the Weasleys than a romantic story *grin*. I think it's amusing that Charlie feels he only has one shot at Hermione, since in canon she seems to be giving Ron lots of chances. Please continue with this, I'm dying to know what Percy thinks is romantic, and I still want to know what Ron will make of all this.
Oh it is so cute to see all the men having doubts and desires, except the twins, who seem so confident. Now what would be interesting is if HG had an insider to the goings on with the guys, like Ginny the spy?? Will Ron rear his head later?
I love your story, thank you for updating. I was afraid it would be one of those cases where the first chapter reels you in and bounces around in your brain forever and the author never goes beyond Chapter 1. And for the record, I'll take whichever Weasley boys Herminone doesn't want. *g*
Neat, Bill seems to have the rest pegged. Are his opinions just the stereotype of each of his brothers or are they accurate characterizations? Makes me wonder. And of course there's Charlie, who is my current favorite, although Bill's a not too distant second. Always did enjoy reading Hr/Older!Weasley brother. Can't wait for more of this!