[Report This]Date: 02/12/2005 07:49 am Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
I'm quite intrigued. In two chapters, you've already managed to hook me - usually it takes a bit more, haha! I don't normally like stories where you can't tell who Hermione is going to end up with, but as I said, this is intriguing. I'm partial to Charlie, but I think you'll be able to make it work with someone else, too. Just, please, not Ron! The ultimate plot twist...I'd have to kill you. Keep writing! ~Morgan O'Conner
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2005 06:09 am Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
Are they sure that Ron is not going to try to get Hermione back? 'Cuz that would mess up all their plans... And Bill's Fleur and Percy's Penelope are dead history? It would be a downer to have their ex-flames showing up. I hope Hermione enjoys all the attention, although my hopes are on Bill.
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2005 04:14 am Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
I really like all the different points of view. However, it was a little short for my taste. Because there were five short "stories" in such a short chapter, it was a little choppy and abrupt. Maybe for future chapters, you should write longer chapters, or you should concentrate on only one or two pov's per chapter. But overall, this story is very enjoyable. You have a great writing style, it flows very well. And the plot is intriguing (funny, sexy, terrific... you choose the adjective)! Keep up the good work!!
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2005 03:01 am Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
It's nice to see the Weasley men all lining up... I would tend to think that the real contenders are Charlie and Bill, if only because of their maturity. And let's face it, Bill's just cool and Charlie's great. Percy might have some kindred moments with Hermione, but she really does have the ability to 'damn the torpedos' and Percy is a bit too rigidly confined/defined by rules. The twins... no chance. She wouldn't take them seriously. But, I think you'll have a lot of fun along the way, and maybe even a few truly poignant moments. I can hardly wait for Hermione to enter the picture... and then for her to catch wind of the fact that she's the main course for dinner.
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2005 02:37 am Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
I'm excited about this story. I really want every guy to have a genuine shot and some sweet Hermione attention, and watching Ron get trounced by every single big brother is fun too. I think it's mostly the intra-Weasley dynamics which are going to be the best parts of this story though.
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2005 02:21 am Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
I love this. Usually I am not a big fan of the Weasleys, but after I saw that you wrote something I had to come and check it out. This story may be the one that makes me a Weasley lover! Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2005 12:51 am Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
I was really excited to see there has been an update, but I was bit let down after reading it. I was hoping for the action to start, and when it didnt I felt sad :(
I really like the story idea, and i hope that as u get more into the guys chasing her you will make the chapters longer.
also 'cos u stated that Charlie loves Hermione "But he almost wouldn’t mind Charlie getting the girl. At least he loved her. He could tell that much. That didn’t stop him wanting her for himself though." I hope that he gets her.
I like your style of writing, and I can tell that I will like the story. I have my fingers crossed that the next chapter has some action!
EmZ
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2005 10:42 pm Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
Let the fun begin. My vote is for Charlie or Bill. Can't decide which yet though. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2005 10:12 pm Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
Fucking fab... That's what I think! Makes me wonder how each is going to woo her in turn, which one she will go for, or whether she will have a taste of them all before making her decision. You must update soon please!!! You've left us all hanging!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2005 09:57 pm Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
I need more! That's what I think!
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2005 09:45 pm Title: Doubt, Hangovers, and Dreams
I, of course, think it's fab...but I have on rose colored glasses! Kidding, another great chapter, love it...keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 02/10/2005 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVE it. Very amusing idea, I have great hopes for this.
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2005 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
OOH LA LA, this story is starting out so well! Aaah, I am so excited to read what happens! I am already loving so update soon soon soon!
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2005 10:31 am Title: Chapter 1
ROFL. This should be fun.
[Report This]Date: 02/09/2005 03:07 am Title: Chapter 1
hmmm... all six five of Ron's brother's interested in his ex... I don't think that will go over so well, with Ron or Hermione. Sounds like FUN!! hehehe! keep writing! I can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 02/08/2005 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
What do they do if she falls for someone else completely?
[Report This]Date: 02/07/2005 01:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I got a right good chuckle out of it. Please continue. :D
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2005 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nifty. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2005 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story begins with potential. It has many directions that it could be heading. I am very interested to see where it is headed.
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2005 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
SO COOL! PLEASE update this soon and frequently! I can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 02/06/2005 10:14 am Title: Chapter 1
lol!! too funny. glad i stumbled over to the Burrow. teehee... dang, I didn't notice if this was a one shot or a wip. i think it's great though. i can just see all the wankers sitting about discussing hermione. Brilliant! Thanks for posting
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2005 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
AWESEOME!!!
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2005 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, this is going to be good. The Weasley boys are hysterical; I can't wait to see where you go with this.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2005 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL. This is going to be hilarious, and a great read. I can't wait for your next installment. I love Weasley boys. :D
[Report This]Date: 02/04/2005 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
I happen to love that insanity. I love the story so far, update soon.