[Report This]Date: 05/30/2006 12:18 pm Title: Universe
It was touching.
Sex between two loving people can be a source of comfort.
Tu use the Invisibility Cloak like this is a clever idea!
[Report This]Date: 05/25/2006 01:36 am Title: Universe
Oh my god i'm in tears you could honestly write some really good fluff and sad fics too ~swipes at eyes~ That was really good.
[Report This]Date: 10/29/2005 07:05 pm Title: Universe
That was absolutely beautiful....It' brought tears to my eyes.
[Report This]Date: 10/25/2005 11:16 am Title: Universe
I got to say that was touching my kudos to the author
[Report This]Date: 08/29/2005 05:30 pm Title: Universe
that sucked i signed up for shit like this
[Report This]Date: 08/13/2005 01:23 am Title: Universe
I really liked it. I like how you made Ron cried. Him crying the way he did was very believable.
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2005 10:03 am Title: Universe
I must say, this is very well done. Sad, angsty -- passionate but in a way that's more about their grief than anything else. Entirely believable, frankly. Good job.
[Report This]Date: 05/17/2005 05:44 pm Title: Universe
*tear* it was sad and beautiful *tear*
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2005 12:31 pm Title: Universe
Very sad. Beautiful, but now I have tears in my eyes that are threatening to overflow. Wonderful story.
[Report This]Date: 04/28/2005 08:07 am Title: Universe
soo sad... love it tho... but sad...
[Report This]Date: 04/23/2005 10:06 pm Title: Universe
I've said this before, but one of the best things about your writing is the way that you make sex reflect the inner lives of the characters. In this case it's grief, comfort, and hope. It's quite literally, an affirmation of life. Beautifully done. I'm very glad you posted on this site. Strider
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2005 02:14 am Title: Universe
The sharing of grief is such a personal thing, and for these two friends and lovers it is so intrinsically wrapped around them that it's difficult to see a beginning or an end. You've captured this impression very well, while showing how much they love each other. Nicely written.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2005 04:03 pm Title: Universe
Wow that was good. But sad, sniff.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2005 11:37 am Title: Universe
Very beautiful, I'm not normally a Hr/R shipper, but this was great. The sorrow and grief and the ending!! very nice detail with the baby's name and all...