ha, ha , oh harry thrust harder and harder
I really liked this story because it was a mix of emotions and desire of Ginny and Harry. Very interesting the way Ginny's feelings can be based on real life experiences.
kinda sad but good
I'm thinking along the same lines as Strider's review. Great insight into Ginny's thoughts. I can't phrase it properly, but I understand the feeling. Wonderful piece.
Pretty good writing style, and entertaining. Ginny's inner struggle was interesting, but I didn't like that she submits to Harry, giving him sex because he needs it & it's her duty as his lover. Would like to see what happens in a sequel.
Highly impressive piece. I loved reading the inner feelings of Ginny as she lives and loves Harry.
I'm so glad you put this one up. I am so impressed by your insights into Ginny's thoughts, and I am so glad, as well, that you offered us a companion piece showing us Harry's thoughts. Any intimate relationship, especially at first, has issues of boundaries and identities-- that's why the first two years of a marriage are the hardest. We all need to re-learn who we are, and who we are NOW. It's hard to figure out how to give without holding back, but still hang on to ourselves. I think you did a profound job of exploring that in this story. Just that fact that Ginny asks the questions, that she wants to love Harry totally and still remain herself, tells me that she will never be subsumed by him, that she is strong enough to be an equal partner to him. Beautifully done. Strider