I really hope that you continue with this story. It needs to be told. I really like what you have done so far! Please update soon. I want to see what else you have in store for Bill & Hermione.
Very nice... Thanks!
Great chapter; although, I hate to tell you, but I think you've gone and developed a PLOT!!!! Now I'm really hooked!! The development of the other characters (Harry, Ron, Remus...) is very believable and I really to appreciate the depth that you've given Bill, Remus' perceptiveness, not to mention the dynamics between the Golden Trio... I'm looking forward to finding out more about this Bridal Chamber as well, now that you've tossed a few interesting morsels our way, in that regard!! Thanks,
Great beginning... although, this is a darker Bill than I was prepared for, his thoughts, feelings, and responses to those around him and to Hermione seem very real, brutually honest, and open... very realistic... I'm looking forward to the rest!!!
22-12-2006 14:38 Rated 10
Very nicely done...
Do you think you'll ever lend your magic to a SS/HG? Please?!
Author's Response: L. O. L. I tried once, and ended up with 'Inarra' the complete antithesis of a SS/HG. I also have a very poorly edited and completely implausible work called 'Into the Dark' which is not of the quality that SHex demands and is thus relegated to the obscurity of my LJ. I adore reading SS/HG fics, but am mostly incapable of writing them, but I thank you for the compliment!
22-12-2006 14:29 Rated 10
Wow, this is getting good. I am enjoying how you've turned this PWP? into something more. I like Bill's perspective on Harry... very believable
22-12-2006 14:12 Rated 10
hmmmm....I think I will read on...
Go Bill, go Bill, go, go Bill! I look forward to the next chapter!
Hmm, gets better and better! I'm liking your interpretation of Bill more and more. And I really want to know about what Hermione and Co. are doing while this is going on. So keep the chapters coming! ^_^
Wow, I can't believe no one had reviewed this story yet. It's absolutely amazing and I was hooked from the start. Hermione and Bill "comforting" one another with sex is a sexy plot idea. I like the pairing anyway, andam eager to read more.
wounderful! Please continue!
great chapter .. im glad the bill told them off... please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now angel
I like your writing. The story is a well written one, as well as being original. Good work and I hope you update soon.
yay for another part!!! But third time's the charm, me darlin', so hop to it! Wonderful work, yet again! lia
wow that was great i love it .... i hope they do want more.. did they use a contraceptive ???? please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now angel
*Grin* Although I feel bad for Fleur, being dead and all... I have to say I'm happy that it means that Bill will have no restrictions... well, at least not the same restrictions anyway, on his interactions with Hermione.
Heck, I would! Thanks, that was delish!
We can’t have more - why not? They're both single, they can get married (if they want) after a respectable mourning period for Fleur. BTW, contraceptive? Thanks for posting!
Now you know, it would be dreadfully cruel of you to simply leave this as a duet. The three-parter is waht's the what right now, and you simply cannot tease us by leaving it just there!
That aside, this was fabulous. I thoroughly enjoyed the first, loved this one, and am now waiting anxiously for the third instalment!
lia
Author's Response: There's at least two, maybe three, more installments on the way. Glad you're enjoying it!