very cute! oh the opportunnities of the room of requirement!
I love it! Especially the ending!
I loved this story; despite the fact that I am primarily a Snape/Hermione fan! However, I have read a couple of Bill/Hermione stories and discovered that there is something very compelling about this pariing... they just feel really, really "right" to me! I'm afraid that I really do not like Ron/Hermione (oh well, I guess I'll just have to grin and bear it in the 7th book...) What a totally unique idea! I haven't read anything even remotely similiar. It was lovely... especially the interaction between them before and afterwards... I think that a little bit more detail in the actual love scene (i.e., more kissing, carassing, and feelings) would be perfect, but don't get me wrong, I'm already plotting for something to come between Fleur and Bill... like I said, there's just something really "right", mysterious, and compelling about Bill and Hermione! Thanks again!
ha ahah ahh very good! I liked the joke at the end
Oh! The end was cute. I really like it, the idea was very original. My only complaint, was that the intimate scenes happened a little too fast. I liked how you had them speak to one another, describing how they felt, that was very good. But maybe if you draw out the sex a little longer, and maybe before that when they kiss and he undresses her and all that. That happens all pretty fast, and I think it would really add to the quality and fit the rating if it were slower and more detailed. Hopefully this doesnt make me sound like a perv, I'm just trying to suggest a few things for a story of this nature. Otherwise, this is a really good story, I thought it was well written and a good idea.
Author's Response: :D Despite a reputation I've acquired, I'm still somewhat nervous when writing sex scenes and this particular one was written quite quickly as it was a cheer up gift for a fellow author. So, you're probably right, it probably could use a little more detail. *blushes*
*snigger* I loved this! It had me chuckling all the way through... and when I wasn't, I had an evil grin on my face. *smirk* mainly cause I don't like Fleur, but there you go, lol!
I did spot one error that you may wish to change: 'Hermione game him a smug grin', as I'm sure you meant gave not game.
I'd love for this to go farther. Very well written ^_^ I especially love the ending.
wow that was great i lvoe it ... later for now angel
the ending made me crack up. nicely done.
Aww what a sweet story! I love these Hermione/Weasley brothers stories! So sweet! ^_^
I loved it! Great job^^
that was soo awsome
FANTASTIC!
that was awesome. hopefully you have a sequel in the works.
Oh, what a naughty reader I am! I was sure I'd left a review for this the first time I read it. Wow! It was unexpected and very hot. I too would like to see Bill 'n Hermione noshing on some more fish & chips and NOT wearing yellow. But if not, this was still fantastic! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! *considers feeding Bill and Hermione another serving of Fish and Chips*
I love Bill and Hermione together...forget that Ron guy; he is way too immature for Hermione. Wonderful story and as I am not too proud to beg....
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Yay! I loved this story. I know in canon they aren't meant to be together but I think they're perfect for each other! I'd like to read how Bill dumps Phlegm out!! Pretty please??? *Puppy eyes* Seriously, one of the best Bill/Hermione I've ever read
Author's Response: Heh, poor Fleur. I wasn't very nice to her. I'll have to keep a "Bill dumping Fleur" scene in mind if I ever get the urge to revisit this. Though... maybe Fleur dumps him? ;P Thanks for the review!
I'm just getting into this ship, and this was a lovely nudge along the road to falling in love wth this pairing. I liked the fact that they were awkward with each other in this story, that element was both sweet and endearing and well as real. I love the end too.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
I want more! Please say there will be a sequel. This is great!
Author's Response: *grins* A sequel may happen, I just don't know yet. But I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
Very impressed! Great start, middle and end. Sweet, touching yet not fluffy. Perfect!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow. That was really very nice. Very realistic. Is there any sequel planned? I'd LOVE to read it!! I think Bill//Hermione is my favorite ship and I was very pleased to find this story. Thanks for the pleasure!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! As for a sequel, one never knows when my muse will revisit a story. I'll be sure to post it if she does ;)
Sequel?! Please! Anyway, very brilliantly done. This is one pairing I've grown so found of and love to read.
Author's Response: :D There's room for a sequel, it may happen one of these days... Thanks for the review!
Gotta love this story! The opening at the end is nice... Lets everyone imagine whatever they want!!! Good work, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you!
I always have loved this pairing, but with Bill and Fleur going to marry in canon, I have all but given up hope to reading a good Bill / Hermione story again. Thank you for posting this remarkable story.
Author's Response: *grins* I've a soft spot for Bill/Hermione. I'm very glad you enjoyed it!
O I really loved the ending! God work
Author's Response: Thanks!