Well, this probably isn't going to be a "proper" review, just a few random thoughts.

So far I think I like the sequel better. If I am correct,. your previous story was your first, and it was slightly visible - not because it wasn't good, but because it had this 'I am only writing for fun' thing. Which can be both good and bad. Good, as it makes for new ideas and interesting plot, bad, because characters that aren't reigned over tend to slip OOC. On the other hand, your characters seemed to be more and more in character as the story progressed, which is funny, for often people try to keep the characters IC and then they slowly let them change until we get OOC. In your case it seems to be the other way round.

And in this story it is visible that you are a fast learner. You gathered experience writing your first story and you make your second better, using it.

I am looking forward to reading next chapters.

Greetings from Poland,
Novinha

Author's Response: I liked your review just fine, and you bring up some interesting points: I think that part of the reason the characters seemed OOC is that because I wrote them as being older and because we only know Snape from Harry's teenager point of view in the books. As you'll see in Prince of Avalon, I've tried not to let them get too OOC, especially Snape. Snape is married and is an impending father, but he's still a snarky bastard, LOL. Thanks for the review and yes, I also agree that I'm learning as I go along. Thanks for the encouragement.

*falls over laughing* Oh my goodness! That last bit was so incredibly funny! I can see Ginny doing that too, trying to cover up, and it doesn't surprise me that Draco stands there proudly. That was just too funny! Good chapter though; good mix of drama, romance, and comedy...very good. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm working to get the next chapter up, so stay tuned!

I like the idea of the waterfall for Draco and Ginny’s ‘private getaway’, very sensual. And I couldn’t help but laugh at Draco’s idea to play Strip Exploding Snap, only he would decide to play that in such a romantic situation. LOL. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "Merlin strike me dead!" he roared. "Cover yourselves before I go blind! This isn't the Garden of Eden!" Hermione shook her head in disbelief. "This ought to be good," she murmured. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- God where would we all be with out Severus….*sighs in content* Thanks for the update. Keep it coming! *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll have you know that the Snapes will be the only voice of reason in Draco's life, LOL. And he will continue to give Severus a splitting headache. New chapter will be up by this weekend, I hope.

You're so quick! Unless this already all written, you cheeky thing. Anyway, this chapter was just the right delightful mix of smut, cute romantic-ness, and hilarity. I cannot wait for the explanation. Nice job.

Author's Response: Gee whiz girlie (I'm assuming you're a girlie) . . . these damned chapters take me weeks to write, LOL. So no, I'm not really quick. FYI: This story is completed to 13 chapters. I'm working on the latest, but it's very slow going because of real life: Kids, work, travel, husband, etc, etc. I would like nothing better than to have the time to just sit down for 3 uninterrupted days of writing. I'm lucky to get in an hour every now and then. Oh well. Thanks for your comments!

A beautifully emotion chapter, it shows as a side we often don’t get to see in Narcissa in fan fiction. I can't wait for more of Sirius and Narcissa. Thanks for the update, keep it coming! *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*

Author's Response: Thanks BL! The new chapter is awaiting validation so stay tuned. I really appreciate your reviews, by the way.

I like the growing relationship between Draco & Ginny, in spite of all Narcissa is trying to do to stop it. Speaking of Nacissa, she and Sirius are cousins, right? I realize that's OK in many cultures, but I'm having a little bit of an 'Ewwww' moment over that. Is cousin-kissing considered taboo in the wizarding world, or am I being a little too prudish?

Author's Response: Marrying between first cousins is permitted in England, as I understand it. However, in my version of the Wizarding world, first cousins are not allowed to marry because the population size is too small . . . there would be too great of a risk of genetic problems (such as squibs). You'll read all about that in later chapters.

Author's Response: And I'd like to add that the above is why Sirius is so freaked out about his dreams. He's having an "ewwww" problem with it as well.

A nice chapter. I liked the background of Sirius and Narcissa -- very cute and very human.

Author's Response: Thanks. All I can say is that life circumstances have psychologically changed Narcissa and Sirius a great deal since they were children.

I loved Shattered and I love this one! I really like these first two chapters. I can't wait until you get to the point in time of your epilogue chapter to Shattered...Shelter I think it was called. But definitely it will still be interesting until then.

Author's Response: Yeah, this is different, for sure because you know some things that are going to happen, but you don't know why yet . . . or how things will turn out (*wink*). Thanks so much for your comments.

Heh. Draco is funny to read about, but I think I'd smack him upside the head if I had to actually deal with him in person. Looking forward to what Eldorf makes of him...

Author's Response: I think Harry Wanker feels the same way you do. Malfoy is definitely high maintenance, hehehe. Thanks for writing!

"Right then. That will be all, Lippy sir."

I'm still breaking out into spurts od hysterical giggling because of that. And because of the whole insult-filled "DIRECT ORDER" from the drama-queen, himself. Gad but the entire chapter was fun! (and long-awaited).

Thanks loads and heres to hoping the next chapter's up soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. Hysterical giggling is always good, in my opinion. The new chapter is waiting to be validated, so stay tuned.

Hey that was good but what happened to snape and hermione's daughter? I liked your Prophesy it really does make you wonder whats going to happen next...hmmm...Intreging, well anyway, email me back at casandrahirzel_15@yahoo.com. Ok bye have fun with the rest of your storie.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to write . . . I sent ya an e-mail explaining everything. I know it's confusing, LOL.

That was a great intro into the new story. Waiting patiently for the next chapter. Gotta go and meet the school bus. Patty

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Patty Pickles! I hope you like the rest of the story, and the new chappie should be up either today or tomorrow.