[Report This]Date: 05/19/2005 10:24 am Title: Chapter 6: Lost
oh no what's going to happen to Ginny?? What is snape going to do to the "BOYS"??? Great chapter. Patty
Author's Response: I ain't tellin', LOL. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05/19/2005 10:02 am Title: Chapter 5: Anarchy
great chapter. very funny. watch it or the vase gets it oh my goodness lol
Author's Response: Thanks! This is supposed to be a comedy/parody so I'm happy you're finding it funny. That's the intention. It's so great to hear from you, pickles.
[Report This]Date: 05/19/2005 04:30 am Title: Chapter 6: Lost
But hurry. This is taking far too long. I want it all now!!! I love the sidetracks and elaborations you're adding. And Narcissa *isn't* Padfoot's cousin?....
Author's Response: You read right . . . NM and SB are NOT related. Da da DUUUUUUH! All the sidetracks and elaborations will all come together at some point . . . I'm "weaving", LOL. Thanks for the review and I promise to update very soon.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2005 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 4: Army
excellent chapter. potter and malfoy next??
Author's Response: Yup. Malfoy + Potter = Anarchy in a Muggle hotel.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2005 11:05 pm Title: Chapter 3: Love
LOL - struck blind... lol
Author's Response: Can't you just hear Snape roaring that one? It wasn't hard to imagine, LOL. Thanks for the comment.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2005 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 2: Stars
bad 'fluence - reminds me of my 3 yr old telling her daddy what kind of influence he has on her... it was cute and funny... some of his co workers tease an say bill you bad fluence on me.. sorry to get sidetracked.. enjoy your story. i mentioned to hubby that you had continued shattered over here... he said geez i just finished shattered. how far behind am i now... told him not to much... looks like i'm the one behind.. i'll tell medicdaddy you've updated since he last read... have a good evening.
Author's Response: COOL! You have a hubby that's into Potterfic . . . COOOOOL! I was wondering where you were . . . I thought maybe you'd been put off somehow, LOL. Thanks for the review and I hope Bill enjoys the latest chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2005 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lost
Heh. Draco is much easier to be around when SEEN and not HEARD, as I'm sure Snape will agree. Wonder what will happen to Ginny? Thanks for the update, but now I want more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much . . . Snape definitely agrees with you and can be currently found pumping his fist in the air bellowing, "YES! YES! They're GONE! WOOOOOOT!" OK, maybe not.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2005 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 6: Lost
Tricky, tricky. I loved the little fight between Draco and Harry. Magical cue cards -- something about the image of the two of them holding cue cards is unbelievably adorable. And then fighting is hot. *imagines naughty things* Nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! Not to give too much away, but stay tuned for Hermione imagining naughty things between the boys, too, LOL. Great minds must think alike! (And I'm talking about you and Hermione)
[Report This]Date: 05/17/2005 12:12 am Title: Chapter 5: Anarchy
What a truely funny story. Shattered was great but this has realy taken the cake. Snapes putting Harry and Draco together is a fitting punishment but poor Harry. The cupids and grupies are a nice touch. I cant wait to see what Harry has up his sleeve. Well chow until you update. Bill
Author's Response: Thanks Bill! I'm glad you think the story is funny because that's my goal, heh. I've submitted the latest chapter and am awaiting validation so hopefully there will be a new chapter soon.
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 3: Love
I just cant stop laughing . The ending was over the top. Very well writen . Bill
Author's Response: You know, that scene just kinda spontaneously popped out of my head, LOL. There were going to end up naked somewhere, why not Snape's house? Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2005 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 5: Anarchy
HA! Gods but that was hilarious!
I've said this before and at the risk of sounding like a broken recorder,
You write Draco SO well. 'specially what with all the zanny dialogue.
As always, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Also, may I please know, roughly, how many chapters there'll be in all? I find having something to look forward to a splendid feeling. :)
Author's Response: You know, I'm not sure how long this is going to be. I'd say at least 20 chapters, all together. Maybe even more. I've written 13 chapters so far and I'm working on the next one, which will be out when my real life calms down. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2005 04:07 am Title: Chapter 5: Anarchy
Keep going, I'm really enjoying this. You're certainly not short of pace with this. And I particular love your Draco - can I have him after you've finished here?
Author's Response: Sure! But you're going to have to share him with me, LOL. I'll take him on Monday, Wednesdays and Fridays; you can have him Tuesdays, Thursdays and Saturday.
On Sunday, we'll let him rest, hehehe.
Thanks for the review, I appreciate it. There's more to come.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2005 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 5: Anarchy
Poor Draco *g*. I'm looking forward to seeing what you are going to do with the civil war thing. Thanks for the update! ~ Sisqi
Author's Response: Thank you, Sisqi! The boys have quite an adventure in store for them while in Nepal. Hopefully they won't kill each other before it's all over (*wink*)
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2005 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 5: Anarchy
"I believe he's saying, 'oil can'," she said soberly. Bwahahahahh! THE BEST line EVER!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you got that little reference, LOL. References to the film, The Wizard of Oz, will be sprinkled throughout this fic. I live in Kansas, so I can't resist, LOL. Thanks for taking the time to review, Sabina.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2005 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 5: Anarchy
Loved the gang of cupids! It sounds like something a bunch of witch-groupies would do. I wonder if Harry's boss had to put him in a full body bind before he'd take the job of bodyguard.
Eagerly awaiting updates...
Author's Response: Yup, there will be much brouhaha with Draco and Harry before it's all over! Thanks for your review, winna.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2005 12:38 am Title: Chapter 5: Anarchy
Oh I defiantly loved the idea of the many groupies that were on a brutal rampage to get to their new eye candy. And I thought the cupids were a lovely touch *snorts*, I can’t wait to see what sort of trouble Harry and Draco will get into whilst they are so far away...should be very entertaining. Thanks again for the update! *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*
Author's Response: Thank you for your continued support of the story, I appreciate it. My mental image of Harry and Draco is that they're just adorable, and I'm trying to write them as such. Glad you approve!
[Report This]Date: 05/10/2005 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 5: Anarchy
An excellent and hilarious chapter. And, I'm not going to lie, I would definitely be one of those groupie girls.
Author's Response: You and me both, girlie! I'd like to think that you and I would figure out a way to sneak into that hotel room with Harry and Draco. I recently read an account from Ringo Starr about how he was in a hotel room back in 1965 and a girl fell out from an air conditioning duct from the ceiling. Ringo ran up to the girl and asked if she was OK and she just stared at him in terror and then fled the room. I would have stayed for a little smooch, myself, LOL. Thanks so much for your support of the story.
[Report This]Date: 05/08/2005 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 4: Army
Hey, thought Shattered was excellent, and so far I'm enjoying this - I wish I could have seen Severus' face when Draco and Ginny apparated into his living room! Anyway, good job ~ Sisqi
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate your comments. And, um, is "sisqinamook" your Eskimo name? It's interesting, LOL.
[Report This]Date: 05/07/2005 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 4: Army
Dumbledore making penis jokes - that is the coolest. This is going to sound absolutely ridiculous, but I love all the "things" in this story. Seriously good job. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I don't know of a man on Earth who hasn't uttered a "penis joke" at some point in his life, so I figured that even though he's a wizard, Dumbledore would be no exception. Thank you so much for your review.
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2005 05:38 am Title: Chapter 4: Army
Lovely story - I'm reading this with a grin on my face. By the way, it's 'en deshabille'. I could do with some Ocularis Nox myself.
Author's Response: Thanks Frealyn! I knew there was something about that sentence that didn't look right, heh. I've changed it. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
[Report This]Date: 05/04/2005 09:58 am Title: Chapter 4: Army
That delayed action spell is a really cool idea. I wonder if the killer was aiming for Draco or Ginny? And what’s up with this Aloysius guy? He seems familiar, but I can’t quite figure out who he is. And am I the only one who thinks having Harry guard the guy he used to hate and the woman he used to date is a bad idea? Ah, well, I’m sure all questions will be answered eventually (and hilariously).
P.S. Loved the idea of Draco wanting a fashionable army. They could charge into battle with a cry of “For Lord Dicksplat, Prince of all Buggers!”
Author's Response: Hehehe . . . yeah, get ready for HP and DM going at it like two rabid dogs. I plan to make it very amusing and in fact, the new chappie will be the beginning of some HP/DM action, LOL. It will be slash only in the sense that Draco and Malfoy will be contemplating injuring each other with sharp, pointy objects.
Author's Response: Oops, I meant Draco and Harry, LOL.
[Report This]Date: 05/04/2005 02:32 am Title: Chapter 4: Army
Indeed they will most definitely need to remove anything breakable from the room when they inform the blond about his new body guard, and on that note let’s add anything sharp or pointy to the list. I liked the scene with, Jacob Sternbucket, in it as it shows us a bit about the rising 'retaliation’ group that is slowly forming. Thanks again for the update, I really enjoyed this chapter. *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*
Author's Response: Thanks, BL! The new chapter has been uploaded and is awaiting validation. I'm so happy that you'e liking what you've read so far.
[Report This]Date: 05/04/2005 02:22 am Title: Chapter 4: Army
Hermione used the Spectometer in 'Shattered'? I don't have any memory of it at all...(re-reading time!)
Draco is just like an-annoying-little-cousin-who'd-do-anything-to-get-your-attention-but-is-frightfully-cute-at-the-same-time.
Twerp-like, would be an apt decription. lol.
So glad you updated. It's quite addictive, really. :)
Author's Response: I LOVE that! "Twerp-like" is an apt description, LOL. You can't help but love him and want to strangle him at the same time. With regard to Spectometer: that's the device that SS and HG used to invent the Shattering potion. Not only does it break down spells and potions, but it helps identify the magical properties needed to invent new spells and potions.
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2005 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 4: Army
Heh...hehehe....I bet Draco's going to be saying something a lot stronger than 'oh bloody hell' when he finds out he's got to stay with Harry! Hehehe! That's just too funny. I liked Hermione's little invention; it sounds really neat and useful. The curse you invented sounds very good, and I like it. It's like time-delay in medicine or bombs...very useful, though not always for good. Anyway, can't wait for more!
One question: about how many chapters before you get caught up to the epilogue of Shattered?
Author's Response: You know, I'm not sure how long it will take before I get to the epilogue of Shattered. That scene is actually pretty close to the end of this story. I anticipate reaching that point in another 5-7 chapters or so. We'll see how it plays out. Thank you so much for writing!
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2005 10:07 pm Title: Prologue: Shattered
I have not strarted on this story yet but I wanted to tell you that I very much enjoyed Shattered. Just one minor note--I thought when Hermione used her kiss she became a muggle or is it just if she went through the ceremony with Voldemort? Keep up the good work and please put Draco with Ginny...pretty please. Maybe someone for poor old Harry too???
Author's Response: The potion that Voldemort drank was tainted with the Shattering Potion, so he and Hermione never completed the Sentient Healing Ritual. So no, Hermione didn't turn into a Muggle. The Sentient Kiss was not a part of the ceremony with Voldemort, so it didn't cause her any harm. Whew! (LOL). And she only had one kiss to give which is why she couldn't save both Snape and Ron. It's complicated I know . . . sorry! Thanks so much for your comments and I think you'll be pleased with the outcome of the story (*wink*)