What a profound insight into the mind and heart of strong, independent women everywhere! Thank you for remembering that Hermione has always been emotional as well as strong, and deeply connected as well as independent. I think you did a great job on this short piece. I would have loved for you to pick up the opening situation, with her running from Bill, and shown us what happened there. Strider
Wow. Just wow. That was wonderful. You caputered Hermione the exact way I pictured her older self. Great job.
I love it do you think you can make like a sequel. If you do thanks.
oh my... that was intense. poor girl. wonderfully written. i could understand her character and her pain. i think you wrote this as a one-shot... but if you continued this story it would be interesting to see more of bill's mentality. or perhap's his regret?
evie
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. There's no plans for a sequel featuring Bill at this time, although I won't rule it out completely.
oh my... that was intense. poor girl. wonderfully written. i could understand her character and her pain. i think you wrote this as a one-shot... but if you continued this story it would be interesting to see more of bill's mentality. or perhap's his regret? evie
Beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :)
YARG!!! *smacks Bill upside the head* I find myself wondering what is going to happen next to the once-happy couple. please tell me that you will be posting more to this!
Author's Response: I'm afraid not. I just can't forgive Bill for being such an arse. There is a sort-of sequel in the works, though, involving Charlie and Hermione. :)
loved the story ... has the right amount of angst and anguish ... just like a guy to toss aside someone that doesn't fit their ideals. are you going to carry on? I hope so :)
Author's Response: I'm afraid this is the end of this Bill and Hermione relationship. I wouldn't want her back with this Bill, anyway, even if he came back begging. :) Another reader requested a happy ending with Charlie, and though that is in the works, it's not directly related to this story and could just as easily be set in an entirely different universe. Thanks for reviewing!
ooooo, this looks good....I can't wait for more...update again soon please...
Author's Response: I'm sorry! I'm afraid it's just a oneshot. I have a Charlie/Hermione fic in the works after a reader of this requested a happy ending for Hermione, but it's not a direct continuation or anything since both should be able to stand alone on their own.
Please don't tell me this was just a one-shot. I think that it should be more, you certainly have the feelings of angst down perfectly. I hope that it continues, it would be very interesting to see where you go with this. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm afraid it was intended as only a quick character study, so I have no plans for future chapters (At least, not with Bill). I had one reader request that she have a happy ending with Charlie instead, and though that fic is in the works, it's not intended as a direct continuation as both can be read separately.
Thank you for reviewing!
Great one shot.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. :)
wow. that was excelent!
curse them little twiggy delicate bits of muslin!
and while i'm at it, curse men for being jackasses! (poor dears, though, they really haven't a clue, have they?)
wonderful work!
lia
Author's Response: ::Hands aglaia Voldy's wand before walking away whilst whistling a happy tune.:: You'll get no arguments, here. ;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!