[Report This]Date: 04/18/2006 10:57 am Title: Part Two
You already know how much I enjoyed this piece originally, and I'm quite happy to have read it again. I love how you've tightened your through-line, and I think there's more 'immediacy' in this final version. You really feel for Hermione's reluctant but self-aware choice when she leaves the island, and then her melancholy pierces your heart as soon as you realize that the choice, while right, comes at a tremendous cost.
Author's Response: Hurray! I'm glad you approve of the changes. I wanted to make both of their choices more motivated. That is, I wnated to get the motivation that was in my head onto the page. Thanks, Bambu, dear.
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2006 12:36 am Title: Part Two
Oh! That was wonderful! I am so glad that you put it up, thankyou for telling me about it, so i could read it! I loved the rnding. I thought it was so sweet. Such a great ending. Wonderful, the whole thinkg.
Author's Response: Thank you, Chavela honey, I'm so glad you enoyed it! :)
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 10:08 am Title: Part One
ack! fantastic story, i can't wait to see what happens. i like your style, a good mixture of action and narration. although, i wouldn't exactly categorize this as *finished*. heh.
Author's Response: Thank you, displacement. I'm really glad you liked the story. It *is* finished, honest. Part Two is just taking a little longer to get through the validation process. Up soon, promise!
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 04:19 am Title: Part One
I adored this! So totally great! I want more! LOL!
Author's Response: You're quick, Chavela! More soon!
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 01:36 am Title: Part One
Wow, this is a storyline I haven't seen before. Please continue, I totally want to know what happens!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing, sassenach, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the story! Part Two (the conclusion) is written and will be posted soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/17/2006 12:12 am Title: Part One
I'm thrilled to see that you've posted this here! Excellent.
Your Draco is a very intriguing fellow, and extremely appealing, even as he is a bit dangerous. I loved the entire beach-theme, as you already know, and it's just as good on the second read.
Author's Response: Thanks, Bambu darling. I have made some changes in part two that I am very happy with. I hope you like it! (I think you will. ;P )
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2006 11:13 am Title: Part One
Hee! You get a response from me! It's been a long time since I read a good Hermione/Draco and I found one. I like the characterization you've given them and I'm ready for part two, whenever you feel like posting it!
Author's Response: Well, I appreciate your response very much, Chica. Thank you for your lovely words. Part Two is awaiting validation from the mods, and should be up soon.
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2006 10:52 am Title: Part One
I am on the edge of my seat waiting to find out where he is. And what happens when she meets him in person.
Author's Response: Thank you, ccrawley. This wasn't necessarily meant to be a cliffhanger, but the story was too long for Pureblood to post in one go. So now we've got suspense!
[Report This]Date: 04/16/2006 09:34 am Title: Part One
When I read the summary about Draco being a bank obber I pictured him in all black with a balaclava on. But your Draco it much sexier with his expensive suit and cool demenour.
i loved the beginning using the clerks point of viewand how Draco acted so smooth during the robbery.
I cant wait for part 2.
Kylie x
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you enjoyed this Draco, Kylie, and thank you so much for commenting. Part two very soon!
Date: 10/13/2008 06:28 pm Title: Part One
Wow. I absolutely love your stories!