Reviewer: Celisnebula Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lyrena 2007.06.26 - 10:21AM

I have to say - I'm really not a fan of Ron at all, and the stark contrast of the Muggle drug descriptions inserted seemed odd at first, but you made it work. I was completely sold on the Ron/NM parts though. Great job!

Author's Response: Your my 1st review ever, yea you! thanks. i put the drug use in a sort of jagged light because its a jagged thing. I didn't want it to flow the same way the rest did, i wanted to it be sort of harsh and glareing.