Perfectly sweet story of budding roamnce. I loved it, read it several times actually. Thank you.
Wow, so sweet and moving ~ will you write the 7th book so all our faves get what they want?!
Nice one. It DID feel like it was a 'deleted scene' from the book. Any more??
It's great! But would RW be so sensitive as to offer Hermione some perfume for Christmas, especially while they were still mad at each other?
Author's Response: ::giggle:: The perfume is in cannon! Book 5! At grimmauld place! She said it smelled, "interesting" I believe.
That was lovely. Very true and well imagined.
Heartwarming story
It made me cry. i loved it !!!!!!!!!
Bambu's review nailed it. This is wonderfuly written. Your portrayal of the characters is believable and their emotions are .... honest. Well done.
This reminds me of a missing scene that you've stumbled across and should have been in the book. It was very nice and true to the canon version of events. I think your Ron is a bit of a mensch!
Author's Response: I have a feeling that we won't get the privilege of seeing Ron and Hermione's first kiss in the books because Hermione is such a private person, and she might not want to do it in front of Harry. So who knows? maybe it'll still be cannon after book 7. Though I do doubt it greatly, it's a nice thought.
I enjoyed this story. I like how you have managed to create this new version with so much of the original still intact. Good job. Is it complete?