Very powerful! Well done!
Holy cow I am stunned that Hermione would betray the light to save Lucius. This was amazinly powerful for such few words. Well done you.
U r so welcome!
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Really good story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Wow. Very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
I am disturbed and in love with this fic. I have read it a few times and each time I feel the exact same way. It is so good.
Author's Response: I'm thrilled to see that I evoked a reaction, Erika! I'm glad you enjoyed it to read it more than once! Thank you!
I'm Crying its so good
Author's Response: *smiles* Thank you so much, Rose! I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it caused you tears. *hands over a box of tissues*
woah, really good!
Off to read the companion peice!
DK
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you, DK! :)
Oops, I read "Unintended" first...oh well!
Again, lovely...hehe, I love Lucius...I think I said that before! Anyways, great fic!
Author's Response: *giggles* I'm glad you liked this story as well, Bellatrix. Both of them were rather enjoyable to write and it's wonderful to see that readers are still enjoying them! Thanks for reviewing!
Good hardcore fic. Also, nice to read a Hermione /Lucius ship that doesn't have him as abusive to her. Hope theat you will follow the requests of other reviewers and write one from Lucius' point of view.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, swinedoc! The companion piece is in the works and it is slowly coming along. Thanks again! :)
Wow, that was pretty hard core! Lucius must have one amazing cock! Oh, my goodness!
Author's Response: *laughs* Well, who can ever truly define a gorgeous Lucius Malfoy? Thanks for reviewing!
WOW...being a Snape/Hermione fan myself, I find this fic intriguing. I adore Lucius as well, and reading about him and Hermione was a pleasant surprise(even IF she became a traitor). Nicely written smut.
Author's Response: Thanks, justme. I'm a big fan of Snape/Hermione as well, but I still have room for other ships such as Lucius/Hermione, Draco/Hermione, and Blaise/Hermione. I suppose I just like seeing her with Slytherins! ;) Thanks for reviewing!
I just saw Bambu's review and I got to thinking. Are you planning this in Lucius' POV? That would be interesint to read.
Author's Response: I may very well do so, ancientgirl. The main factor is finding the time to do so. With my time turner fic to work on, along with various tests that are coming up, free time is a precious thing. But I just might do so, eventually. :)
I had to hunt you down from ship-to-ship... this is an interesting twist in the potential relationship and you've done a good job of her POV. I would also enjoy knowing a little more of the backstory, it seems such a stretch for both Hermione and Lucius, but an enjoyable read nonetheless.
Author's Response: *blushes* This is what comes from a night without sleep. I was barely thinking straight and I've always had a small interest in this ship. As for more of the backstory... well, I think I've been inspired. I might just write another chapter, one from Lucius' point of view, giving his take on all that happened. Thanks for reviewing, Bambu! :D
I love Lucius/Hermione fics. There are so few of them around, and in most he is abusive towards her. Although I hated the idea she betrayed her friends, it was still believable.
I hope you write more of this pairing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, ancientgirl. I'm rather fond of Lucius/Hermione fics myself and this is the first one I've written. At first, this was just going to be a simple PWP piece, but, well, me being me, I just had to add a little plot to it. And the dark subtext just wormed it's way in. ;) Thanks again for your review!