[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh another chapter!! Yay!! I like the way this is developing and that Hermione isn't taking any nonsense or self-pity.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love it! "It's not as if a sulky Weasley is going to deter me". Priceless, and then telling him to clean his room. Definately an original plot, and I haven't read too many stories with the Charlie/Hermione pairing. I can't wait for the next chapter to be up.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
What fun! In my opinion, there simply are not enough stories about Charlie in fanfiction. This one is big fun, I can't wait to see how Hermione gets poor sulky Charlie to cheer up! :)
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
I suck at reviewing individual chapters but I just thought I'd let you know I've enjoyed your story so far.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Cleaning his room - a very important first step in his recovery from depression. (BTW, are Hermione's parents alive in this story? Just wondering if she'll be seeing them on her break.) My fave line in this chapter: "I deal with Professor Snape every day at work. It's not as if a sulky Weasley is going to deter me." Made me grin! Thanks for the chapter update.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for giving Snape a date! I hope things turn out well for Snapey (it would make Hermione's apprenticeship easier if he's a happy camper), as I'm expecting things to work out well for Charlie and Hermione. This IS a happy-ending story, right? (reader makes hopeful puppy eyes)
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow ! please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 10:11 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow this is the first time i have ever read anything about charlie in such a light. I like it! More want more please. Also the "snarky" proffessor on a date? in a white shirt. WOOT! will wonders never end!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 06:29 am Title: Chapter 3
nice to know he knows how long it will be until hermione comes to see him again!
update soon
Author's Response: Yup, he's watching the clock. :-) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 01:34 am Title: Chapter 3
Excellent chapter. Can't wait to see where you plan to take this story and the characters. Impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll get the next chapter out as soon as I can. This story has been fun to write so far.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 12:39 am Title: Chapter 3
Squee! Thanks for the update and all the best for 2005.
Author's Response: You too, spaz! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 12:32 am Title: Chapter 3
Charlie is soooo stupid! He should learn not to bite the hand that feeds him. This story's great though! Please, update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks for the review. Charlie's a little snappish at first, but I think Hermione can handle it. Like she said, she deals with Snape on a daily basis, LOL. I'll update as soon as I can!
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 12:30 am Title: Chapter 3
Woo, wonderful new chapter. Charlie's all to often overlooked, and this is an interesting, and very plausible, character development for him. More, please!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm really glad you like it! Thanks. I adore Charlie.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm really glad you like it! Thanks. I adore Charlie.
[Report This]Date: 01/01/2005 12:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Excellent as usual, Rilla. You capture the characters so well and draw the reader completely into the story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 12/31/2004 11:58 am Title: Chapter 2
ooooo pretties. very, very nice thank you i hope there is much more to come. beautiful story, thanks.
[Report This]Date: 12/28/2004 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ooooh, I'm liking this. Can't wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: 12/28/2004 07:47 am Title: Chapter 2
Would you continue if i told you the plot line was awesome?
[Report This]Date: 12/27/2004 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Please update soon, can't wait to find out what happens!
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2004 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
Excellent beginning. There are far too few Charlie/Hermione stories. Can't wait for the next installment.
[Report This]Date: 12/23/2004 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh yea!! A CW/HG! This is great. I love this storyline. I am following your fic "Mercy of the Fallen," and I love the Charlie and Hermoine stuff in it, but I have to admit that I'm pulling for Snape in that one. I'm so glad to see a story where I can root for Charlie instead. He's sexy as hell, and a damn sweet guy. I'm looking foward to you next update!
[Report This]Date: 12/22/2004 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lovely! I enjoy all your stories. "Walking the Line" is my favorite, but this comes in as a very close second. Poor Charlie; I hope Hermione has a solution for him. I'm looking forward to your next update! :)
[Report This]Date: 12/22/2004 07:27 am Title: Chapter 2
What a lovely, well written story. Love me a bit of Charlie/Hermione. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2004 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Very good, I cant wait to read more. Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2004 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
What a wonderful story you are writing! Keep up the great work. I hope you are able to up date soon.
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2004 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm definitely enjoying this. Charlie/Hermione is a fairly rare pairing, so I'm pleased to find one so well-written. Looking forward to more!