[Report This]Date: 12/27/2008 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a lovely, poignant vignette!
Author's Response: :-) Ah, thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! And apologies for the lateness of my response. I was away from this site for a long time and had no idea I'd received any reviews!
[Report This]Date: 04/03/2008 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sonnet 116 is my very favorite sonnet. Thank you for this beautiful story which fits so well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! I love this particular sonnet as well. Incorporating it into a short Dramione piece was a labor of love.
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2007 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
aw...bit sappy though. i like how their relationship mirrows the sonnet.
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate your review.
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2007 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just...at first the sky was mauve, pink and blue, and then, in few minutes, it started _snowing_? You should fix it ;)
Author's Response: I had assumed readers would understand that the weather changed a bit in the time that she was sitting at her desk, but perhaps you're right that it needed clarifying. Anyway, I've taken your suggestion. Thank you.