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Reviewer: VesperLangdon Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2011 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Adorable!  I truly love this story!

Reviewer: Lola Noxus Anonymous star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/28/2007 12:26 am Title: Chapter 1

Ah, and I had always pictured Draco as a sour, mean little child like Mary from The Secret Garden. But this story is sweet nonetheless. I love the nappie change scene!

Reviewer: Leia Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is beta'd?? Errr... Can I re-beta it for you, pleeaase? It's just that it's a bit distracting as is. I thought the story itself was sweet and certainly something I've never come across before! :o)

Author's Response: honestly? no ^^;;; *hangs head in shame* but sure, I'm always open...you can privy me in my email for any suggestions: tei_hakuto@yahoo.com... thanks lots! ^_^

Reviewer: Leia Anonymous star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/13/2006 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is beta'd?? Errr... Can I re-beta it for you, pleeaase? It's just that it's a bit distracting as is. I thought the story itself was sweet and certainly something I've never come across before! :o)

Reviewer: redhead_brunette06 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2006 01:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

ooohhh thats so cute! draco would have been the most adorable baby!! and trying to eat lucius's hair!! ive had that problem before with my little cousin. i feel sorry for him

Author's Response: and the lesson for the day is always tie up your hair...thanks for the review! ^_^

Reviewer: LoveTheLife Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2006 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was hilarious. Lucius has a soft guy isn't really my type but this was excellent! I now wonder how Draco really was when he was young. You gave me lots of ideas though. Love it!

Author's Response: thanks much! It's nice to know that I inspired you ^_^

Author's Response: thanks much! It's nice to know that I inspired you ^_^

Reviewer: Belladona Bittern Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/10/2006 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

That is so adorable! I can't even begin to imagine Lucius acting like a parent, and little Draco is such a handful!

Author's Response: thank you! aren't all babies like that? hehe, I had fun with those two ^_^

Reviewer: Myranda Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/27/2006 06:47 am Title: Chapter 1

It's so sweet!! You could never imagine Lucius being a softie! haha I really liked the story! Good job ^-^

Author's Response: thanks lots! yes, not always you see the proud pureblood on a domestic setting...goes to show that he's human just like the rest of us after all ^_^

Author's Response: thanks lots! yes, not always you see the proud pureblood on a domestic setting...goes to show that he's human just like the rest of us after all ^_^

Reviewer: Jade Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1

WELL GOOD I WUD RECOMEND IT 2 ANY1!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Do spread the "good" news! ~_^

Reviewer: SeaIsleWitch Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2005 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very sweet! Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! ^_^

Reviewer: JTBJAB Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww....sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^

Reviewer: Belondra elf Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was really good reaally funny I liked the end bits best I never would have known Lucius Malfoy to be so sweet, kind and gentle it's scary

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I too fell off my chair when I imagined him being all cuddly wuddly with his son. But then again, what new father wouldn't? ~_^

Reviewer: tabitha Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 09:54 am Title: Chapter 1

Dear Author, in my previous review, I truly did love your story but I do have a question. Were the witch servants or attendants to accompany Narcissa? Have the day off? Or maybe, Narcissa planned this in order for father and son to bond? Just thought I asked but this is your creation and you are the God of it.

Author's Response: Oh, I would say they're Narcissa's. They don't do much in the story so I didn't mention them anymore as the story progressed. Thanks for the question! ^_^

Reviewer: severina Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2005 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was the CUTEST THING!!! Omg, I loved it. well done.

Author's Response: thanks so much! yes, and the author is cute too he he he ~_^

Reviewer: tabitha Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/25/2005 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Delightful, Absolutely delightful! Just the way I would imgaine a new wizard father would react, especially, Lucius Malfoy. You had wit, tenderness and even drama. Lucius was still Lucius in the beginning but started to realize the joy of child care. The use of magic was great. I found myself laughing out loud, NOT GOOD, considering that I'm at work. Please, do another, SOON.

Author's Response: wow, thanks! see me blushing ^_^ don't worry, I'm cooking up another one... hopefully I'll get it done soon ^_^

Reviewer: Midnightlilly Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2005 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ah that's so cute, my little neice is almost four months old and she makes a lot of noises. Men and Diapers don't mix, especially big blowouts.

Author's Response: thanks for the review! yes, men and diapers are like matter and anti-matter; my own dad nearly fainted when he was changing my younger brother's nappy himself ^_^

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