Reviews For Make A Memory
Reviewer: kazfeist Anonymous 
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Date: 04/24/2008 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 04/24/2008 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think I read this elsewhere. The last two sentences keep resonating. Lovely job! :D
Author's Response: I keep cross posting it to other places, lol. I like knowing what other people think of my writing since I'm relatively new to this. Honestly I have no idea where the last part came from. I wasn't going to add it for fear of being melodramatic, but it seems to be working. Thanks very much. :)
Reviewer: sweetbriargirl Anonymous 
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Date: 04/01/2008 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 04/01/2008 12:14 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought this was beautiful; it has a poignancy about it that runs deep. However, I was completely taken by surprise by the end! All in all, well done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Hurray for the element of surprise, huh? ;)
Reviewer: MoonlitRiver Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/22/2008 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 03/22/2008 10:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Sad and beautiful. I love it. :)
Author's Response: I'm a sucker for bittersweet stuff. Glad you loved it. Thanks! :)