[Report This]Date: 07/16/2008 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I was a bit frightened with Draco's lack of stability. But, why wouldn't her friends figure out what was going on? They may be dim, but they're not completely brainless.
[Report This]Date: 10/19/2006 02:47 am Title: Chapter 1
It is wonderful. Take a deep breath! You did well. It is very dark. Domination usually is. I loved it.
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2006 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
It was dark and i like that about it but i think the ending was not normal (lol) :)
[Report This]Date: 08/16/2006 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my, that was so eerie but beautifully written i could feel every emotion.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2006 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ssh. This is dark; the other side of magic and its misuses. Fine-tuning your spouse into what you want them to be....Bbbrrr.....
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2006 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was pretty dark in my opinion. I am extremely disturbed by Draco's actions. Didn't she ever have an opportunity to ask a friend to help her get away from him? Very disturbing. Beautifully written, but very disturbing.
[Report This]Date: 07/23/2006 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was interesting. Draco's love for Hermione was frightening in it's intensity. I have to admit that a part of me wondered if Draco loved Hermione at all because it all seemed to be about HIS happiness in disregard to her own. Draco also seemed a little...unstable. Overall I enjoyed reading it and I thought the plot was very interesting. I loved the darkness of the piece. Part of me loves Draco/Hermione happy-ever-afters but another part of me loves the darker aspect- that the ending might not be so happy.
[Report This]Date: 07/15/2006 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh! That was...freaking awesome! It was so dark and perfect. You set the mood of the piece nicely. You can feel Draco's insanity. I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 07/15/2006 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1
The abuse scared me throughly, but Draco is twisted in a way but also sweet.
[Report This]Date: 07/14/2006 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. So evil. Loved it though. Very good job
[Report This]Date: 07/13/2006 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was difficult for me to read, as I generally stay away from stories that feature abuse; having said that, I appreciated the intensity with which this fic was written and your not being afraid to explore the darker side of wizard nature without backing off from it. Well done! LSV
[Report This]Date: 07/12/2006 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
wow that was intense but greatly appreciated i loved it. it was brilliant. sorry for any (sp)'s.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2006 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
ouch, but angsty and Iwonder what the cocktail was... good sequencing.