such a sad little story. one little thing though, "Hufflepuff" not huffelpuff. I'd like to know what was in the letter that her parents sent to her...hmmmm well done. i enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: *eeps... thanks for pointing that out! I'll fix it right away. As to the letter - there were clues. See if you can guess. Think about the situation and about what a parent might say to a child in danger. Then think about the Hufflepuff traits and how Susan reacted. I don't think it will be difficult if you consider carefully.