[Report This]Date: 11/12/2007 11:14 pm Title: Ginny Gets an Offer
Totally crying and it is only chapter one! I love the set-up and I totally adore the twins of Bill & Fleur. I love that Ginny has her dream in front of her, I cant wait to find out what it is that she is looking for.
[Report This]Date: 08/18/2007 01:04 am Title: Victory Day
Ohh. I usually don't go in for the fluffy ones - I'm a sucker for 'em and tear *way* too easily - but I'm so glad I read this fic. It's the perfect ending to a dreary day, very heartwarming and just plain good all 'round. Great job!
[Report This]Date: 04/27/2007 08:12 pm Title: Victory Day
Great Story! I couldn't stop reading it until the end.
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2006 12:00 am Title: Victory Day
I'm generally not a fan of the canon pairings, but your fine writing drew me in, and you did a great job of convincing me, at least for the course of the story, that Ginny and Harry are well suited. I loved their parallel yet intersecting courses, and the irony in how they came to be at odds. A warming story;-)
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2006 05:28 am Title: Victory Day
*Sob* What a lovely story, about love and dreams and destinies. A lesson we should all take to heart.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 10:19 pm Title: The Birthday Party
VERY good use of scene to propel the story and the conflict. Paints a very evocative word picture (especially the graf that has Harry walking in the front door, twins on each arm). Watch the adjectives - it occasionally borders on overuse; strong nouns are better. But that's a quibble - and thiis is a fine chapter. Excellent job of capturing Ginny's internalized feelings (the grabbinest towards babies; the wondering WTF Harry is *really* thinking). Strong work.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 10:02 pm Title: Harry Gets an Offer
Nice parallelism to Ch. 1. Could use *one more* coat of polish (repeat: Amateurs write. Pros rewrite), but this is very, very close. It certainly sets up the tension/conflict (when combined w/ Ch. 1) to carry a story.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 09:52 pm Title: Ginny Gets an Offer
First chapters should: - introduce characters - introduce (or at least foreshadow) the primary conflict - leave your curious enough to keep reading. Certainly succeeds on points 1 & 3. As for 2 ... well, let's just keep reading, shall we?
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2005 09:07 pm Title: Victory Day
Brilliant, you should write a book.
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2005 12:05 am Title: Victory Day
i absolutly love it mariann
[Report This]Date: 07/25/2005 11:26 pm Title: Career Advice
yay im so happy and want to read more
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2005 12:31 am Title: Victory Day
Oh this was just perfect and so sweet. I'm going to go to bed and have sweet sweet dreams tonight about not forgetting your deepest dreams.
[Report This]Date: 06/04/2005 11:26 pm Title: Victory Day
Thank you for a delightfully sweet story about making dreams come true. It makes me want to show up at the Weasley's for Sunaday lunch, if for no other reason than to see all my favorite people, and how their happy lives turned out.
[Report This]Date: 05/28/2005 12:48 am Title: Victory Day
Ahhh. That was a sweet story. Thank you for sharing it.
[Report This]Date: 05/25/2005 04:12 pm Title: Victory Day
Frigging beautiful. I love it. Go you! Go sentimentality! Er... yeah. It was great. -Mel
[Report This]Date: 05/25/2005 06:10 am Title: Victory Day
All right, your forgiven. Thanks for the happy ending. Even Shacklebolt looks to be on his way to having his dreams come true. Congratulations on a wonderful story.
[Report This]Date: 05/24/2005 04:49 pm Title: Hold Fast to Dreams
Now why in the world couldn't she tell him what was going on. Now Harry's mad and then she's going to be mad. Big sigh. ok. I'm done ranting and raving but please, update soon.
[Report This]Date: 05/19/2005 03:51 pm Title: Career Advice
Fantastic chapter. I can't stand the thought of Ginny and Harry alone and miserable. I can't wait to see how you progress their romance.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2005 05:25 pm Title: Career Advice
Wonderfully, sweet! Keep up the great work and update soon please.
[Report This]Date: 05/18/2005 01:53 pm Title: Career Advice
Brilliant! Bloody brilliant! "I want you to have lunch with me... and dinner... and breakfast the next day..." I absolutely love that line... specifically because that was one of the first things my boyfriend ever told me. *sigh* Beautiful. -Mel
[Report This]Date: 05/17/2005 06:42 pm Title: The Birthday Party
I'll be blunt: I. Demand. MORE. (Ha, gotcha didn't I? Thought I was going to say something mean and nasty, didn't ya? lol...) I love it. It's just so beautiful... and two new kids! More mayhem to the Weasley household! (*squeal* MORE!) -Mel
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2005 04:43 pm Title: The Birthday Party
That is so touching. Please tell us that Harry and Ginny are going to have a heart to heart. Keep up the great work and write more soon please.
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2005 09:52 am Title: Harry Gets an Offer
Please continue with the story. My interest is piqued. Looks as if you have a good thing going here.
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2005 09:52 am Title: Harry Gets an Offer
Please continue with the story. My interest is piqued. Looks as if you have a good thing going here.