Wow. That was so sweet and sexy at the same time. Great job!
Its alright..except it is too exaggerated..and not at all like Ron and Hermione. Good try though...
OMIGOD!! This is one of THE best stories ive read about ron and hermione- I love how you portrayed ron! Keep up the great work!
This is exactly the kind of story that i like... it was the whole jealous, strong ron that made it perfect... thank you!!!
WOW.I READ THIS ONE AGES AGO AND I KEPT ON THINKING ABOUT IT WOW.
Ron kinda scared me at first, i will admit, but it's cool the way you ended it. I think u should have a sequle type thing. Like when there older.
AWWWW! That was great! :) Yea!!!!!!!!!
oooh. oh my dog. I love, love, love, DO YOU HEAR ME, LOVE Dom!Ron. *shivers* That was totally and completely sexy. Well frickin' done.
Absolutely brilliant...I love Dominating!Ron...and I alos love how we got to see this vulnerable, more tender side fo him at the end. Excellent work!
Woohoo! Love that Ron took control of the situation. Wonderful!
Bravo!! Just found this story through a LJ community called unsung Ron/Hermione. Fabulous set up...the only way Ron can tell Hermione how he feels is by having her say it for him! Perfect characterizations of both characters, with a flourish of love and concern for Harry as well. Mmm..I think I really like Ron when that Gryffindor courage starts flowing!!
AMAZING. You truly captured what I like to call Lion!Ron. This was just...so perfect. You made my night :)
that was sooooo good! I'm so close to tears right now! There happy though. oh that was sweet and...somewhat surprising. I wish that could really happen! Aw, Ronnie and Herms... so perfect. Just...MADE for each other!
man that was so cute. i love that she Thrills when he lifts her cause hes so strong. ive totally been there and it just makes your legs got to jelly. great story, would love a second part, maybe with a higher rating.
I loved it!!! That was so good. I loved the idea and the dialogue. Great job!
I love this story. I know some people don't like Ron, but he's one of my favorite characters. Thank you for writing him this way. This is by far my favorite Ron fanfic. Thank You.
This was cute. good job.
Reminds me of a friend who didn't want his girlfriend to notice his erection when they danced together, so he sellotaped his cock to his leg. They had to cut the sellotape off in Emergency, because he hadn't remembered to allow for if he had one! Nasty. So actually this was fairly believable, and strikes me as something Ron would do. Very funny
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review; though I have to admit it may be the strangest review I've ever gotten.
Wow! That was fantastic! Is there a sequel to this?
Oooh I loved it. I absolutely adore Ron/Hermione one-shots. But I'm positive I've read it before. Do you post anywhere else?
....*stunned silence*......holy. crap. that was....UNBELIEVABLE!! it was perfect! at first i was mad at ron, then shocked, then breathless, then crying, then i wanted to burst out giggling! absolutely INCREDIBLE writing. many, many kudos.
omigod, that was the cutest thing i have read in a while. Good job!
That was such a great ficlet!!! I'm going to add it to my favorites!
Oh my Goodness!!! That story was so sweet! I like how it captured both of their personalities, and I loved Ron's temper. Excellent Job!
This is pretty good, but why is ron in a grump????!!!!!!!!!!????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway, this is a good story, C YA!!!!!!! Polly ;)