A marvelous story! I love Ron's reaction!
~Lisa
what the hell is this a harry potter porn
I think the story was great. when are you going to write the next chaprt of the story. I can't wait to read it.
AHAHHAHAH im shivering!!! dats da best story of da century!!! Sooooooooooooooo good i didnt want it to end!!! the suspense!!! u r one of the best writers ive seen and read!!! i wanna write like u one day!!! I would rate this a billiob out of ten but the numbers dont go that high!!! if u would like to read my story im a memeber of http://www.harrypotterfanfiction.com/ and im called candy_shop there u will find my stories!!! i cant believe this story is sooo great!!!
Wow!!! I loved it!!!
This was a great story! I always thought Ron and Hermione loved each other! this was a perfect way to have it told!
What a wonderful story! You wrote Hermione very much in character and Ron the way I've always pictured he would be--once he grew up a bit. I hope you continue with this!
Very Well Done, I am demanding a Sequel
quite hot, but somehow i can't see ron working up the nerve
That was adorable...any chance for the smutty details once they get alone? Heh-heh!!! Loved how Ron took over command...HOT!!!
Wow, great job at depicting a very sexy Ron!
*Big happy sigh* Aww! That was splendidly done. It was so sweet and funny and I loved it.
Awww.... I liked it a lot. It was very nicely written. :)
Good turn. This was a refreshingly fluffy piece. Thanks for sharing this post. I like to see Ron being purposefully demanding; it is a nice change.
I guess it's kind of sweet, but Ron is... scarily possesive. Frankly, if I was Hermione I would have run for it. That was borderline abusive.
That was so sweet and intense. Ron was just perfect. I loved it.
This was a clever, clever device for you to use to allow Ron to make his declaration, since he gets so tongue-tied around Hermione sometimes. I found him charming and rather commanding. It was nice to see it happen to Ron. Maybe being the Quidditch Keeper helped his confidence...
Poor Victor, I kinda liked him. Very pumpkin sweet.
ooh!!!! that was just lovely dear!!! What a wonderful little bit, it's just... *sqwee!* i loved ron's dictation, and the declaration in letter form, it was so very sweet. wonderful job!! lia