[Report This]Date: 04/23/2008 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
I absolutely loved this story! It was brilliant.
[Report This]Date: 06/03/2005 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
ok it's late at night as i write this...but if hermione was in hogsmeade, which is near hogwarts, and Tonks was in Diagon Alley in London, how did Hermione get to London so fast? Or am I missing a massively salient point (oh so much more than possible!)? Otherwise a nicely worded story, and it's nice to see the girls rescuing themselves rather than waiting for the cavalry! yay girls!
[Report This]Date: 04/22/2005 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 8
This story is awesome! It is well thought out and well written. Allowing Tonks and Hermoine to be empowered enough to save themselves is wonderful. Thank you for a very thrilling story!
[Report This]Date: 12/21/2004 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 8
Very well written. Nice work.
[Report This]Date: 10/31/2004 09:20 am Title: Chapter 8
Wow, this was really good. It was like reading a good book, all I need is the popcorn.
[Report This]Date: 09/21/2004 07:56 am Title: Chapter 8
a nice wonderful short story... I like it
[Report This]Date: 08/07/2004 12:15 am Title: Chapter 8
I really enjoyed your story. It was well written and very imaginative. I especially like how the girls saved themselves using their wits. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you. I must confess that I'm very pleased myself that Tonks and Hermione didn't have to wait for a knight in shining armour for their rescue.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2004 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
Bravo! I am particularly happy when women don't allow themselves to become victims, and they are able to effect their own salvation.
Author's Response: I guess it's the feminist in me that speaks out... :-D I'm also very annoyed with all those stories that make Hermione into a dimwit and has to be rescued. Thank you for your kind reviews. Perhaps there will be more Lucius sometime in the future.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2004 12:39 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad that you moved this story here, it is as gripping on the second read as the first. I am intrigued to see how you plan to get our heroines out of Lucius' clutches...
Author's Response: Well. To have your story re-read is good praise indeed! Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 08/02/2004 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
I really like this story. It is very detailed and has an interesting plot. Lucius is a very, very bad boy. I love seeing Tonks and Hermione getting one over on him!!! Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you. I have just updated, and the last and finishing chapter will come tomorrow. I hope you will like them.
[Report This]Date: 08/01/2004 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
Excellent chappie! No wonder Hermione was feeling reasonably calm...(sounds similar to a self protection spell i used in one of my stories!)
Small nit alert: It will amuse me so much more to have you were you are right now.
think you mean where instead of were.
Author's Response: Thanks! I haven't read your story, will I find it here?
And thanks for the nit. It is now picked. :-)
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2004 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm delighted that you've decided to post this here. It's a difficult and superb tale you weave... Her intelligence and cleverness in the face of Lucius' sadism is quite heroic.
Author's Response: Thank you. Then I just have to hope that the rest will satisfy as well.