Ha ha! What a delightful little fic!
Excellent story! I love your clever, tricky minx of a Hermione as well as plotting Lucius!! Please do continue.
Please Please finish it. It's wonderful. The Hermione I always knew existed.
I'm still secretly hoping for an update... Have you posted this story anywhere else? You would get a bigger public at FF.net or Skyehawke?
Absolutely love this story - can't help but 'smirk' along with the characters. Please, please do update!!!
Just came across your story and couldn't stop reading. I love your Hermione who is just as devious and manipulative as Lucius. They truly make a great couple. Can't wait to see how this goes on.
Amazing story! Absolutley love every chapter. Your characters are so "in character"! lol :] And I love the switching back and forth. Please keep writting! I have to know how Ron and Harry take the news!
I love it! It's very funny, and I like that it's mostly dialogue. I think it keeps the pace up and my attention from wandering. There's nothing worse than paragraphs of description.
01-17-2007 15:17 Rated 10
I read through this with a big smirk on my face. It's so manipulative Hermione, something so many people forget when they write her. Te he. Very good.
01-16-2007 21:06
Yea! You updated here :) I love this story - it's so deliciously mischeivous. Narcissa and Hermione in the same room was just....too much. Can't wait for Harry and Ron's reactions!
MithLuin
01-16-2007 22:31 Rated 10
Fluffy, yes, but very enjoyable. Like a down duvet, homemade whipped cream, summertime clouds,....
03-15-2007 19:53 Rated 10
awesomeness!!!!! really great story!!!!!
I am very pleased to see this update! Thank you!
Oh, this is getting funnier with each chapter. You must update more often, this is spectacular! Thank you!
Oh my! This really is an amazing story. There's just something about it that I cannot quite describe, only that I adore it. I love your characterisations and the gentle humour. I cannot wait to read more.
this fic is fabulous!! I have been cracking up!! please update soon? :D
Great story!!! Can't wait to read about the wedding night (at last)
loved it! The curtains were hilarious...I could just see it. Looking forward to the next update.
Yay, you updated here! I particularly liked Lucius and Severus' conversation. It contains so many hilarious lines! “Severus, she is of age. She is even consenting.” As if most of his female interests would not be? And...“It would be entirely legal, and no one could find you at fault."... "Dumbledore will surely kill me. Merlin knows he has been wanting to,” the Potions Professor snarled. “Really?” Lucius asked with interest. Lucius' idea of 'fault' is clearly different from other people's! I look forward to more....
Let me add my voice to Novinha's: Thank you, thank you, thank you. Please keep writing this story. Please. *puppy eyes*
“My parents noticed his teeth. That was enough.” OMG, that is soo hilarious. I love that line. LOL The whole way this chapter goes back and forth is just wonderful. The jumps between characters are seamless. And I love how you are portraying Draco. He’s perfectly smarmy, especially when talking about “sounds” LOL Priceless. Please, don’t leave us so long for the next chapter. Oh yeah, loved the part with Hermione’s parents. That definitely shows she has a Slytherin side. LOL
I love this story. Its hilarious and so original, Please don't stop yet!
Aghhhhhhhhhhhhh (screams hystericaly) YOU UPDATED!!!!!!! I could sing. But seriously, great chapter. I hope that somehow my review will prompt you to update before christmas, or tomorrow. There MUST be lemons soon please.
I snickered through the entire chapter. It's just too deliciously snide. Will there be more?
hehe amazing i love this story i hope theres more