[Report This]Date: 05/27/2005 07:45 pm Title: The First Signs of Life
wonderful chapter! they keep getting better and better! please update fast!
Author's Response: In progress. :-) Hope it continues to entertain. I'll do my best to hurry.
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2005 12:06 pm Title: The First Signs of Life
Great update! Thank you for allowing us to hear from Hermione & Lucius in the same chapter! Please update soon!
Author's Response: You're welcome! I'll do my best to update soon. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2005 10:46 am Title: The First Signs of Life
What?! Damn! I'd LOVE to know what happens next. This is defintely spicing up, eh? Update soon, MS JAG.
Author's Response: In progress. Liberal hand with spicing is always a good thing. :-) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2005 05:49 am Title: The First Signs of Life
A year of substantial Plotlessness? Oh, the poor man..*giggles*
This story is so good. I simply can't wait to read more.
Your invention of the three signs which cancel the Recognizing spell is a work of art.
Author's Response: How could Lucius survive without Plotting, really? I'm so glad someone likes my spell. :-) Thanks for reading! I hope the next chapter lives up to expectations.
[Report This]Date: 05/27/2005 05:32 am Title: A Mutually Beneficial Offer
This story certainly made my day. I love Lucius when he plots and schemes, and I enjoyed it very much that he made Hermione and Draco do the same. So very...Malfoy-ish! Well written, not too fluffy, and Lucius in canon, even considering the fluff. And Hermione? A wonderful description of her.. Madam Malfoy. I am sure as well that she'll be the next Minister of Magic. Well, on with the reading. Luckily I still have ch. 4 left...
[Report This]Date: 05/16/2005 01:00 am Title: A Mutually Beneficial Offer
This story is unfolding beautifully. I love how it's all intertwining into a great big mess. Poor Draco, stuck in the middle, I really feel sorry for him. I love how you are having Hermione attack this whole issue. I can see her wanting to study it all in books, and not quite understand things and it's completely plausible that Madame Pince would help her. :)
[Report This]Date: 05/15/2005 04:31 am Title: A Mutually Beneficial Offer
brilliant! and thanx for the email about the update! Id love another one for your next update too please!
I love the way you skip between present and past without doing Flashback like so many do......
Please Please update soon!
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2005 10:51 pm Title: A Mutually Beneficial Offer
Great chapter. I'm so glad that your muse has continued to inspire you to continue writing this tale! I do hope you continue! Thanks for the post.
[Report This]Date: 05/14/2005 06:29 am Title: The Problem with Overconfidence
hey i like this alot! Its different and i am finding it enjoyable! could you email me when you update? magicstar008@Hotmail.com
[Report This]Date: 05/13/2005 02:36 pm Title: The Problem with Overconfidence
Very nicely done. I love the back and forth between interrogation scenes and back at the scene of the action. The only minor quibble I have is that I was pretty sure the dementors left Azkaban after the breakout and I can't imagine the Ministry letting them back, but it's a really minor point. I imagine prison there would be quite depressing even without them there.
Author's Response: Damn. I knew I'd miss something canon. I'll try to have that as my only deviation. Sorry about not responding to your last review...got caught up in editing. Next chapter coming soon. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2005 02:24 pm Title: The Problem with Overconfidence
"...diverted my eyes..." indeed. This is quite funny. I am so looking forward to your next chapter. This is a hoot! Please, please more Lucius and Hermione! Oh, and I loved Snape's line “Truly, I believe it is a match made in the deepest pits of Hell.” This is great! Please post again soon!
Author's Response: I had the most fun writing Snape's lines. A blast. Chapter 3 is already in line so should be relatively soon...Thanks for reading! I hope I continue to entertain.
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2005 02:16 pm Title: The Problem with Overconfidence
Another great chapter. I love how you've interwined past and present to form your story. I'm really interested in seeing how Lucius reacts to finding out Hermione's heritage...
Author's Response: Sorry I didn't respond to your earlier review. Does this chapter make up for it? Lucius will not find out about Hermione's heritage for some time, but he will start to get clues soon. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/12/2005 01:59 pm Title: The Problem with Overconfidence
I think this story is rather intriguing. I thought that Hermione doing a stripping scene would have been OOC, but you explained her motives nicely, so it made more sense. I'm looking forward to reading more.
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2005 09:43 pm Title: The Setup
This is a really interesting start. I hadn't thought I'd be a fan of a Hermione/Lucius fic, but this is a very engrossing start. I really look forward to seeing how this story unfolds. Okay, I really want to know how the stripping job went. :) I think I need help, but that was a perfectly Slytherin thing for Draco to do.
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2005 12:45 pm Title: The Setup
Oh my god! You had me at Lucius. This is really good! Please write more!
Author's Response: I've gotten several chapters written, just a matter of prepping them for posting. I hope you continue to find it enjoyable. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 05/06/2005 10:23 am Title: The Setup
I love it so far! Original... I'm looking forward to more. And a description of the dancing...;)
[Report This]Date: 05/05/2005 03:01 pm Title: The Setup
Oh, yea! More, more, more, Please! This is quite fun. I want to see Lucius' reaction to her striptease!
Author's Response: As you request, more comes soon, including Lucius' reaction. Thank you for reading! I hope it continues to be fun.
[Report This]Date: 05/04/2005 08:18 pm Title: The Setup
hmmm... This is quite interesting. I am looking forward to reading the rest of the tale. You certainly have me hooked!!!
Author's Response: I certainly hope I continue to keep your interest! I live to serve and all that good stuff. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/04/2005 02:34 pm Title: The Setup
this is looking really good, but Hermione stripping?
Author's Response: I know it sounds implausible, but then, I could make the general 'it's fanfiction' reply. However, I will say that the more I read Hermione's statements and actions, the more ruthless she appeared to be. An article I read somewhere (Red something Publications) really made me question what she wouldn't do to get what she wanted.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 05/04/2005 12:46 am Title: The Setup
This is shaping up to be very amusing. I like the formality of the present scene against the past. Continue soon. :)
Author's Response: Honestly, that never occurred to me. Thank you for the insight! I hope I continue to amuse you. Next chapter should be on the way soon.
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2005 10:37 pm Title: The Setup
This is a very interesting start! I hope we see more, soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I have the first four chapters prepared, so it shouldn't take too long. I hope you continue to enjoy it! Gracias!
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2005 09:26 pm Title: The Setup
Oh, I'm looking forward to this. What fun!
Author's Response: Fun is exactly what I was aiming for! Thank you for reading! I hope you like the next chapter too.
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2005 09:19 pm Title: The Setup
Wow, great start! I hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! It shouldn't take too long for a new update. I just hope you continue to like it.
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2005 05:21 pm Title: The Setup
ohhhhhhhhhhhh fun! although.. he's mine! :-) i wish.
Author's Response: hehehe...yeah. If only wishes came true, eh?